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for My Beautiful Treasure

by Rainbowchid

schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Still good enough. Inu is so dumb. Can't wait to see what happens to iz.
person Ree-san
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the clarification. It explains more of her thought process and is more understandable. I'm very interested in how you develop her character more and Sesshoumaru's adjustments to being with her, as well as the fallout I'm looking forward to when they get back home.
I appreciate the effort you took in answering. I tend to leave reviews when I feel I have something to say that may have at least a small chance of being useful as I tend to squeeze in reading in between doing other things or when I'm playing hookie with something work related! I look forward to the next update. :)
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
First your welcome. I review because I believe that the writers like to know that someone is reading their work. Second I look forward to when your ready to come back. See you soon ( hopefully).
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow she preg .
schedule March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow inu,s mom is something else. Can't wait so good.
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow so whole village gone K&S died? Didn't see that coming. This story is NEVER boring just love it.
person Ree-san
schedule March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When will Kagome notice the obvious that she knows nothing about dog demons and actually ask? Why won't Sesshoumaru actually instruct her? I like the tension of the story, but actually confrontations or discussions about things would also be very interesting fallout. Like, Inu Taisho putting Inuyasha's mother in her place. I'd like to see more of that convo and her tantrum! Hope your computer issue is fixed soon, those always suck.
person babseygail
schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter! She has her sassy pants on. I almost fell off the couch laughing at the booger part. Keep it up, even though you said you didnt feel mich inspiration, it was well written and entertaining. Thank you for writing.
-abbey
schedule March 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was worth the wait.
person Shyneamor
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't going to read this story but I'm happy I did. Very interesting and fun. I like how bold Kagome is in expressing her displeasure. I like how you introduce each character from the original story but with your own twist. I'm curious to see if Miroku and Sango would be making an appearance on this story.