AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for My Beautiful Treasure

by Rainbowchid

person audrav2
schedule August 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I really  like  this  story. The funny  way you put things. Do you  have  any  other  stories? I'd  like  to  see  more  of  them. Good luck  with  your  writing!😊😉

schedule July 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh please please please update soon! Love the story so far!!!

person syndey
schedule May 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter pleaz this is another one of my favorite sesskago stories and I only like two please continue to make more chapters I'm looking forward to reading them
person lara5170
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm only at chapter 4 but I believe I've read this before but I don't understand how no one remembers who Kagome is when it said that her mom was friends with the Eastern Lady and they exchanged letters when they didn't see each other. I also don't recall anything about her past being recalled anywhere in the rest of the story as if it was of no consequence and I can't help but wonder if it's supposed to or if it will be brought up at a different time. I'm also confused about how Kagome could be 21 if she was just a small child when her parents died and it said that her mom didn't get pregnant until 5 years after Kagome was born and that this takes place 13 years later. Wouldn't that make Kagome only 15? I plan to continue reading, I'm only at Ch.5 or 6 now but I hope it will be continued soon.
person lara5170
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I must admit that now I've finished catching up on this I really hope it'll be continued. I really hope that something happens to Izaiyo for chasing Kagome away. I'd love it if she were killed or sent away for her actions. I'm also curious about what Sessh's mom found out about Miko's and look forward to them finally meeting, since Kagome and she haven't met yet. I also wonder what Naraku's up to and if Izayoi becomes his partner. I really look forward to reading more, I'm dying to finally see Kagome and Sessh become mated.
person lara5170
schedule January 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Izayoi is punished for what she did to Sessh and Kagome.
person lara5170
schedule September 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just realized something, in 1 of the chapters didn't you mention that Kagome's parents were the 'human' lord & lady of the Northern Lands & that Kaede knows who Kagome is because she was a family friend and the healer that took care of her mom while she was pregnant? If that is so then Naraku obviously killed them while Kagome escaped so shouldn't it mention that Kaede is aware of Kagome's heritage & miko status? Then there's the part that mentions how Kagome's mom was best friends with the Eastern lord, so wouldn't the Eastern lady know who Kagome is? Other than the demon's in this story, everyone other than Kagome has brown eyes. Wouldn't that be a dead giveaway regarding who she is to the other noble families? (I'm sorry I'm having trouble with my shift key so some of the words that should be capitalized in this review aren't unless my pc's spellcheck automatically fixes it & for some reason it isn't always doing what it should be... Damn 'windows 10', ever since I downloaded it my pc hasn't been working well for me & I hate it. Grumble, grumble) Also, why wouldn't Kaede tell Inu-taisho about who Kagome is to get her more protection as the Inu's are their protectors?
person lara5170
schedule September 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really look forward to reading more of this story and seeing what happens to Inu's mom for lying to Kagome. I'm also looking forward to finding out what was in the book Sessh's mom was reading and when Kagome has the baby. I'm also curious about when Sessh is going to finaly mate Kagome so his heir isn't considered a bastard?
person AsteralChild
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please add more! I would love to keep reading your work!
person Ree-san
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've been following the story from the beginning. I know some won't agree with me, but I'm not fond of Kagome doing things like this in stories (even though I know it's a story device and her gullibility is legendary). She'll make some wild judgment that makes decisions for other people without ever talking to the person and will feel self-righteous about it. She's then easily forgiven for causing pain and other problems. It's just not an attractive trait to me; it doesn't come across as selfless really. With this story line, did it ever occur that even if he was engaged to someone else first, what if it wasn't love or what if there was a reason that he wanted to break it off? It's as if Kagome thinks other people can't make decisions for themselves or that they're owed a chance to speak for themselves. And who is she to decide that he wouldn't have contact with his child?