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I like that you made a sequel. I understand not always wanting to make a sequel, even if one's requested. In this case though, I think it works. I'm usually not a sucker for darker stories so I appreciate that you gave them a happy ending. Nothing wrong with a good dose of Stockholm syndrome from time to time. Inuyasha meant well, and to be fair, he had thought she was Shippou, at first. It had only been after the fact, when the damage was done, that he'd learned the truth, and then he'd wanted to keep her. Can't really say I blame him. And my mistake on assuming the place was a sex club before. Good thinking on Kagome's part to look for him there, since he'd moved out and she had no idea where the new house was. At first I was afraid it was going to turn out to be Shippou again, manipulating Inuyasha, but then I reminded myself that Shippou couldn't do Kagome's image perfectly, so I trusted that it really was Kagome. I'm pleased with the epilogue-y type ending you gave this. Universe closed. Good job!

should sssssooooooo do another chp!! her reaction the council more amazing smut lol...list goes on and on lol
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Didn't even know there was an Amanda Palmer version of Polly until you mentioned it! Had to make a quick detour to youtube. Ooooohhhh...creepy. Me like. And I agree, it fit this story perfectly. One does wonder what Kagome was doing walking into the private back room of a sex club, LOL, so she can't be too innocent in this. And Shippou definitely took way longer than two seconds to change, so what the hell was he doing the whole time? LOL. Warped perception of time, much? I'll be there in a minute! Thirty minutes later... I totally knew he'd come in at the end, though, LOL. Good job!