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by monophobian

schedule October 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I just read both stories. They are amazing! So much goes into these and you can tell. Very well written and plotted out. And what imagination you have. You are one of the best writers I've seen on here.

My mind is running with everything that may have happened. Personally, I'm usually an InuYasha fan, but since these are AU, I'm more flexible. In AU, I lean more toward Sesshomaru. These are the first stories I've found that have really hooked me on Koga. He really stands out, I adore him!

What did Sesshomaru do to her?! Everything from just a nasty conversation to near rape has crossed my mind.

I had an ex once and, and when he found out I was moving on - a year later, I might add- he did everything he thought he had the right to do, to "remind me" that I would always be "his" and that he's always right "there". He was arrogant and believed that I should always love him, regardless of what he said or did or if he was even around. He was angry that someone would take that away from him. It culminated in rape, in a sense. I didn't want it, emotionally or mentally, but at the time, I did still have some feelings for him. So even though I said no, he knew what buttons to push, and I did it anyway. It was a similar relationship to what I feel Sesshomaru and Kags had. I was disgusted with myself, broke it off with the new guy7, and didn't talk to my ex again for nearly 10 years. But it's a small world, made smaller by social media...

If anything along those lines happened, shits gonna hit the fan, quick. Even if he didn't touch her, just telling her those things and making her feel them again would fuck her up.

Keep up the great work, hope to see more soon. Please don't wait 2 more years 😭.

This is really good! Well done

schedule June 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

just read both stories and can't wait for more  

person Anon
schedule May 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please release a new chapter soon
schedule April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
We'll that was fun. Looks like there's something about to break.
person katsumicute
schedule March 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yey!! I was so excited when I saw you updated! Thank you!! Another great chapter as always! What a great guy Kouga is not forcing her to take care of his needs like sesshy did. Can't wait for the next chapter! <3
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw I just love this kouga. Thanks for update. Till next time.
person Brianna
schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story ! I can't wait for the next chapter ! You're doing a really good job .you're one of the best authors i've found
schedule January 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OK looks like trouble coming.
schedule January 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your welcome. I really do like it and this chap was another out of the park home run. See you next chap can't wait to see what happens next. What ever is sassy planing and what will Kong do? Does Kags still have feelings for Sassy? Will Kong have go all wolf on the in ( smile) . Such fun what a way to start off the new year.
person mahh
schedule January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
you !
you need to update more often ... this is one of my favorite fics and i want more :D
Keep up the good work and i hope to see a chapter soon!!!