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November 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Please please please keep updating!
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November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
About your comment rape seems logical to you? This hardly fits a S&R love story.
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm one of the guilty ones who read and disappear...I can't get enough of your writing it's so addicting and so good! Thanks author
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Believe it or not this is pretty good. I enjoy it but I wouldn't mind seeing...a bit more poetry(?) to the sex. Not just random fucks and pussy. Be more descriptive in the way you write sex.
As for your characters I hope nothing, truly, barbaric happens to Rin. I hope Mr. S gets that stick out of his ass.
As for your characters I hope nothing, truly, barbaric happens to Rin. I hope Mr. S gets that stick out of his ass.
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The day I leave my first review is the day you update. Probably coincidence.... Still good update (despite no sex). To me personally I enjoy longer story with detail and descriptions thrown in; about the setting and the characters. Explict sex scenes don't have to be "explict", they can be poetic and descriptive of the act of sex.
anyway I like your story so far despit the shortness of your chapters.
anyway I like your story so far despit the shortness of your chapters.