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by MeledyText44

person Ayame
schedule September 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your off to a good start but you prologue and 2 chapter should be combined also revise you work you made some errors and left out some words.
person nari-chan
schedule September 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
good start add more soon:)