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for After The End: New Beginnings

by SplendentGoddess

person Nikki Bao
schedule July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I just finished chapter 16. I know he has hang-ups about himself 'cause of how he grew up, but god. If he was my husband, I wouldn't care how 'dog-like' some of his anatomy may be, I'd still fuck him. Stand there, strip my clothes off, and lay down saying "Take me". Now the question is after some foreplay, how will he act after he smells Kagome's orgasm. I'd imagine his demon saying "let me go" and his eyes flashing. Well I'll have to wait til tomorrow to find out. Yummy, Yummy, Yummy. :-D
person shyneamor
schedule July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so loving this story. I like the contrast of innocence and sexual desire. Please continual.
person kokoronomiko
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome plot! Funny how the more things change, the more they stay the same. I swear, sometimes Inu couldn't catch a clue in a bear trap! I wonder exactly what it's going to take for him to "see the light," so to speak. I can hardly wait for the next part!
person Phil
schedule June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this! Extremely well written, and you captured the characters perfectly. I just hope that this whole misunderstanding gets resolved quickly...
person L
schedule June 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this so far! I can't wait to read more! I really like how you write Inuyasha, he is a realistic, mature version of the character.

Though, I must confess, I am a little afraid this is going to be 20 chapters of them beating around the bush instead of just finally telling each other how they feel. I do hope that won't be the case.

I eagerly await your next update!
person B22
schedule June 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! I love the way you portray the characters exactly how they were in the anime!! Please update again soon!
person Annie
schedule June 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story so far. I love that you went with the original ending and added your own touch to it. However, I have read some stories out there where they just rush right into the relationship after she gets out of the well. I personally think the way you are writing this story is perfect. I never thought that they would rush right into it, Inuyasha is a bit of a recluse and very private and kagome is still a little shy so I believe it would take them a little longer even though they are well aware of each others feelings. You are doing a splendid job! (No pun intended, but still tehe)