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for Captured

by kaotixkry

person Libracourt
schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Summary says Kagome gets captured...however there's only been talk of Sango (which I noticed you spelt Songo). Is this a Kagome fic or a Sango fic?
schedule May 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see you continue this story, but I'm also sad. I did like how the other story started, even though there was a lot going on. Kouga and Sesshomaru's treatment in the other one I like, because I thought they were going to get revenge and all. Plus I like how it started off with Kagome, Kouga, and Sesshomaru. I know stories take different turns and all, which I do respect that. But I do like this story, I'll support you on this one. I love the smut and the details you put forth in your story. Thank you for the update! Keep up the good work! :-)
schedule May 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter two! I so didn't see Sango coming into the picture. I like Sesshomaru's scene, but I wish I read more with him in it. I hope to read more of him, since you kind of been skimming the surface with him. I can't to read what you have in for Sesshomaru's smut scene in the future. Sango and Kouga's scene was awesome by the way. I never really read about them, so its interesting you brought that into the story. Very well written and the smut lol! Thank you for the update! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great writing! :-)