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Do you plan to finish this story? I hope so, it’s pretty good. I wanna know what Narku is up to. I need to know how Kagome and Sesshomaru will escape,  no I must know! Awesome story, well written! I hope you finish this!!!

cuando sera la continuacion  , u.u se espera inpaciente   

Next chapter pleaz I love this story

Please update :)

Finally now maybe we can get out of this dungeon.

Very good story. I look forward to the next chapter.

I wonder why Naraku wanted to virgins for his plans. Once Koga took Sango's, Narku needs to adjust his plan. Is he just a sadistic bastard that wants to rape the women that helped get in way?

I enjoyed how every detail was explained but felt very confused about what was going on. The summary mentioned Kagome/Sessh & that was the main reason I chose to begin reading this because I'm a huge Sessh/Kagome fan & usually enjoy reading any FF that has them together but there was no sign, nor mention of him in this other than from Kagomes P.O.V. when she'd thought (or hoped??) she was having a dream. I don't know if this will be continued but I'll try to check up on it from time to time. I'm curious about what Kogas involvement in this is, as it described him as also being 'collared' while at the same time he seemed to be taking orders (not well) from Naraku. I had no idea that the male with Kagome was a 'cat' youkai until I read it mentioned in the A.N.. I'm very curious about where the rest of the inu-tachi is & how Kagome & Sango ended up in the clutches of Naraku. I'm not a fan of Naraku in an intimate way because while he uses the face that he stole from another to make himself attractive, I can't get past the spider/insect part of him because I'm both terrified & disgusted by any & all insects/spiders.

OMG! I love this chapter! The emotions you put into this chapter. The inner struggle with Sango was having with herself, was well written. Kouga, I like how he didn't just want to please himself. It was sweet of him to think of her discomfort, and please her too! Well written chapter, great job. Also, I like the cliff hanger where Naraku comes in! Will she get pregnant or mated, you have me thinking lol! All in all I loved it! Keep up the amazing writing! :-)

I loved this short chapter! The insight on what's going on with Kagome is appreciated! I like how you portrayed Kagome, I think any girl would go nuts if they didn't get no release lol! Now you have me thinking if Kagura has been abused by Naraku, and feels for Kagome because she went through the same treatment. My mind is whirling with ideas lol! A quick question though, will be there be abuse to the charcters like in your first story? I hope you keep that aspect to the story. It makes us feel more connected to the characters. Just a question, by all means I don't mean harm to you as an author. Great writing from you as always! Keep up the amazing writing you do! I can't wait for what you have in store for Sesshomaru! :-)