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for The Blue Bikini

by DreamCatcher121

schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Its not just pure sex that happens in like 5 minutes, its an actual story and I LOVE IT!!! Please update soon, I want to read this!!! Even if I am the only person to review, gah!!! I love it!!! Does that make me creepy to love this new story so much?? ... Yes?... OH WELL! I am going to go read it again :3 You had such an amazing idea for this series and it makes me happy you thought of it becauseeeee yeah, its now going to be one of my favorites:) Please update! AND SE-CHAN YOU LET HER CALL YOU MARU-CHAN ALL SHE WANTS!
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! I personally think you should upload them tonight ;) But that's just me, Its your story so the decision is ultimately up to you!! But I thought the part with the flowers in the beginning was absolutely adorable! :3 Glad you don't think im creepy lol :D
person nikkei
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Keep going, I wanna read more!