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for The Blue Bikini

by DreamCatcher121

person Jurz
schedule April 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A-fucking-mazing, I love it!!!!! Please email me updates at bluesupernova256@aim.com
person lara5170
schedule April 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like how you ended the fight, making it so the onlookers were able to see Kagome as powerful & compassionate. I'm glad Kikyo was re-killed(?) & found it funny how she really believed that if she won Sessh would have sex with her. I didn't know if Sango & Miroku saw the fight, but wondered what they thought of it. I'm very curious about Kagome's new appearance, between the markings she received after mating Sessh and the physical change she underwent just before killing Kikyo. After her near-death experience that seemed to have awoken her full powers & the control she had over them, she noticed changes to her face, ears & increased senses (like, smell). Since it mentioned her body changing before she mated Sessh, it made me wonder if her full powers awakening were what began her transformation & if she's going to change more.

I hope her transformation will be permanent and I'm curious to find out more about it. I wonder if she also got stripes on the other parts of her body, like Sessh does. I can't wait to read more of this .........
person lara5170
schedule April 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I really enjoy your writing style. Your writing is very descriptive and I like that because I can actually picture what's going on in my mind. I also enjoy reading the different characters points of view (P.O.V. ?). I'm a huge fan of Sessh/Kagome FF & I like to read stories with romance, drama, suspense, action & a happy ending. There are many Sessh/Kagome stories with romance & while the may or may not have a happy ending (because they are never completed),but most are full of angst. I know there are many writers & readers who don't like stories where Kagome is portrayed as being anything more than a human(mortal)miko but I'm not 1 of them. I like when Kagome is portrayed as being intelligent, powerful, beautiful, unique, independent & with good self-esteem.
I really hope you choose to write more and I look forward to reading more of your work.
schedule April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Anybody else checking back here like 3,000 times a day to see if its updated? lol
person lara5170
schedule April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I finally got a chance to read the 2nd chapter and I enjoyed it. Now I just want to keep reading while I have the time.
person lara5170
schedule April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Kikyo has some nerve for a corpse. I hope Kagome kills her.
person lara5170
schedule April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've just finished reading Ch.1 & I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more & find out what happens next.
person lara5170
schedule April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like that on this site I can leave more than 1 review. While this time I'm leaving a 2nd review for Ch.1 because I was doing 2 things at once and sent the review without the other things I meant to leave in it, but there are also times when I reread a story, or part of it, and want to review again. I don't understand why some sites won't allow more than 1 review per chapter per person. What I'd wanted to write was: I really like this style of writing, I'm enjoying the fact that this story has more to it than just lemons and I LOVED it when Kagome said what she did about necrophilia. When I read stories where Kagome catches Inu with Kikyo and just runs away crying, I often wonder why Kagome doesn't see him being intimate with this dead (or is it undead?) being, stinking of death & decay, who has a physical body made of material similar to drywall and she doesn't automatically become disgusted by of the fact (or thought) that he'd be turned on by such a thing. I can't wait to read more...
person nari-chan
schedule April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
im happy that she was freed and has finally found peace. i never liked her, but she did deserve to find peace in the end. the result of this battle is more then just kogame proving she is strong but now people know she is strong, merciful and rightfully deserves her place by his side. please update again for the fun smut we were teased with lol
person Blaque
schedule April 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I hope that you will continue it!!!!!! The lemony scenes were great, do not doubt your talent!