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for The Blue Bikini

by DreamCatcher121

person Anne Lautir
schedule January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It was awesome and I love the story please update the second chapter
person McLovin
schedule January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good story yo. Please update
schedule November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love everything about your story I hope you make more chapters soon !!!
person Denise
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far. I really can't wait to read the next chapter.
Do you know if you have any plans for Sesshomaru to meet Kagome's mom? How exactly did Kagome get her Youkai abilities?
person lara5170
schedule October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the chapter where Inu was being treated by Shizuka after his fight with Masa & I'm confused. When the other males came into the room where Inu was unconscious before she began to treat his injuries they made some kind of comment about Inu living or Kagome-sama would never forgive him (Kagome's human but they seemed to respect her??). When Shizuka made a comment they called her 'human' & made a comment about her being so much lower than them that she didn't have the right to speak to them. Then after she finished treating Inu & was looking at him, she looked at herself in the mirror & described her appearance & markings (blue hair, grey eyes & markings on her face) & mentioned something about 'the markings of a noble Inu mocking her'. So, I'm confused...is she human or an Inu youkai??
person angel23
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very hard core sex and things being broke in their bedroom.
person Learia
schedule June 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story of my two favorite characters on InuYasha. I mean I liked InuYasha, but I always wanted Kagome and Sesshomaru to be together. Well done off'ing Kikyo, especially done by Kag's herself. :) I also like the fact that Sess and Inu are going to try to be a family..finally. But I wonder, what little change of plot do you have planned for us now? Is Naraku going to come into the picture to wreck havoc on Kagome and Sessy's love? Maybe he will kidnap her and try to take her for himself? I've LOVED Naraku from the get go. He is sooo deviously and wickedly sexy. Haha. Can't wait to read the next chapter, as well as the rest of them. Happy writing.
person Nikki
schedule May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really amazing story ^^ I love it and I hope they will have more than 2 pups cx
person IndigoBeauty
schedule May 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter, very fitting. I cant wait until you write more <33
person DragonLady132
schedule April 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just read what you have put up and i absolutely love this story! So can't wait to get to email saying you have another chapter up!