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Yes...you're being very mean. All the things I like that I see from you...!! I really want to see more of this one! Please? :D

i can't wait until your next chapter!!! i love your story plot!!~

Poor Sesshy....but that was cool of Yasha to do.

This story is good, but I'm super curious on who Inuyasha's parents are like! I mean who leaves their kid to live by themselves when they want! Really, great story.

LOL, you might be being mean to Sesshoumaru, but you were just nice to all the rest of us! Yay an update! And you weren't as mean to Sesshoumaru as you could have been. As soon as you cut away to him in the restaurant I knew you were going to have that turn out to be the same restaurant Inuyasha and his parents were going to. You could have had Sesshoumaru wait their table, LOL. So tell him to relax if he's giving you problems, because you could get a lot meaner, LOL. I really liked the way you handled this, that only Inuyasha saw him, while he was still by himself and they were able to talk for a minute, and Inuyasha realized something was a touchy subject and that gesture he did with the keys to his apartment, that was awesome of him. Inuyasha's a really great guy in this. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next. :-)

This story is pretty interesting and with a take on 'smart' Inuyasha that is just intriguing to me for some reason.

Can't wait to read more so keep up the good work ja ne

So glad to see you updated this! Man, I can understand Sesshoumaru not wanting to vent to Inuyasha, yet, since obviously they aren't that close, yet, but to whom can he vent? Nobody knows of his situation. If I were Sesshoumaru, that would've totally been the last straw, that stupid painting. He should just take his job and use that as rent money and move out to an apartment and let his mother go down in non-literal flames. But then of course he probably can't do that, because she's still his mother. But if he doesn't make enough monthly to cover their mortgage and utilities - and it doesn't sound like he does - then they're both about to go down in flames, anyway. It would be less humiliating for him to move out of his own volition into an apartment than to stay with his mother until the repo men show up and the bank slaps a paper on the front door. Maybe he should start trying to whore his mother out on the side and beg some random rich dude to PLEASE marry her, LOL. After all if she lands a new husband, problem solved. I'm sure there are plenty of ugly millionaires who'll jump at the chance to wed the first beautiful woman willing to marry them. Of course, there's the little catch of Sesshoumaru's mother going along with that idea... Guess it depends on how forcefully he can shove the truth down her throat, and how badly she wants to stay rich. Please try to update this faster! It's getting good!

This story is great! I hope for a new chapter soon. I can't wait for Sesshomaru to find out how brilliant Inuyasha is and for them to make progress in the more intimate areas.

Hope you pass this test, Sesshomaru...You really need a break to just breath a little.

It's always nice to see something new from you, because I know it'll be well written, but don't forget about your older stories in the process! Sorry to hear you were ill, and also your cat. With it having just been Easter I sure hope your cat's illness doesn't have anything to do with Easter Lilies, if you'd gotten any of the flowers for decoration. They're oober poisonous to cats. Hopefully that's not it and whatever is wrong with kitty, he/she will get better momentarily. Hopefully you can keep churning out new chapters for both this and your other stories. :-)