rate_review Reviews

The chapter was amazing!!! I swear I can't get enough of your story. To answer your question, no I guessed, our great minds think alike lol! I love how its getting so intense. Thank you for the insight on Miyo. She is dark, twisted, and cruel. You pulled it off well. Run now you have me wondering, whose the father? If its Sesshomaru, boy do I feel bad for Run. Not because he is the father, its because they lied to her. Which I hope I'm wrong. Sesshomaru and Kagome I think there is going to a setback, I feel it!! Naraku and Sango can't wait for the convo! Inuyasha and Jak too. OMG I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the brilliant writing, you do! :-)

Omg I love this story so much.

I can't stop crying. I felt like I was there. Truly a amazing written chapter. So many emotions and you brought them to life. You did a wonderful job writing it out. I can see why it took some time to write. I'm glad Kouga finally got in the mix. Poor Sato I though I hope she keeps the baby. As for Kagura I feel bad for her still. It wouldn't be a bad idea to pair her with Kouga. Its just a thought that popped in my head. I love you story. Its getting very interesting and intense. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the brilliant work, you do. :-)

Love your story. Can't wait to read more!!

I think the story flowed well. You worry too much. Naraku was harsh with Kagome, but I like that. Sango reaction was good. She picked her friend over a man excellent. The whole situation with Sesshomaru his siblings. Was a very well written scene. Last but not least the smutt. I absolutely loved it. Your a natural at writing smutt. It had a drooling lol. I felt bad for Kagura. I hope she gets hers. I love this chapter. Keep up the excellent writing. I can't wait for the next chapter! :-)

I like how Satomi is revealing a little by little about Sesshomaru's past to Kagome. The little in sight about the complications of Naraku and Sango very interesting. Naraku and Kouga past was well told. Also Satomi and Seshomaru's past is intense and I like it. I think smut is a great idea. I support it a hundred percent. I say go for it. All in all very good chapter. Keep up the wonderful writing you do.

Really can't wait to see what comes next!

I personally love this chapter the most so far. It has a little bit of everything in this chapter. Its brilliant and executed well. I like how it was woven together through out the chapter. I do like the Inuyasha and Jak pairing. Its not something you see all the time. Its usually Kouga that pairs up with Inuyasha. I like how you chosen one dominate male, instead of two. I think of this series of a mini novela. I like how you don't just focus on just one pairing. I love how all sides of your characters stories are told. I do appreciate the detail you put into all characters and the trails they go through. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I've been reading your story since the beginning. I love your story and I like direction it's going in. It's rare to have a Naraku and Sango pairing. Honestly I think in this story the pairing works out. I think you should add a little twist before they get together. For example people trying to prevent from getting together. It would make it interesting. Sesshomaru and Kagome I love how things are going so far. I would stretch things out between them. Just to pull in the audience more, but this is your fanfic. I hope you don't take this the wrong way. I do love your story very much. I'll be waiting for your next chapter.

I don't feel like you added the backstory in any awkward way. It flowed well. I liked how kagome didn't open up to sess really easily, it made it more realistic.while I want them to get together it can't be rushed. So good chapter! I need more, please write soon.