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March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amg it's amazing, you always have me standing on the tips of my toes. So exciting, dramatic and well written! C:
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March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! Sesshomaru would instigate their first kiss! It was short lived, but it happened none the less. Honestly, I love where Kagome and Sesshomaru are heading, it's a never ending thrill ride, lol! Naraku, boy is he getting depressed, but don't worry Sango is there to save him from himself. I can't wait for their private conservation, forbidden love is the best, lol! I know once they get some action of their own its going to be sweet and romantic. Then comes in Kohaku and Miroku breaking it up, dumb asses, but they will not succeed, lol! Kouga, he deserves his guilty conscious for what he did to Naraku. If he would have listen and use that nose of his. He would have been able to tell Naraku wasn't lying. I hope his dad gives him a beating he'll never forget. Can you say father's like son's, because their dad's are spiting images of each other, lol! I do understand where Naraku's dad is coming from though, I would flip a switch if my son was in the hospital. Also, I like how Satomi just laid it on Sesshomaru, he finally opened somewhat of his eyes. Also, I knew Kagome could take away his pain, something to do with her power, and gave him new sensations, he never felt. Oh, I just love it!!! Thank you for this beautiful update!!! Keep up the awesomeness of your writing!!!! :-)
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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was an intense chapter, but I loved it every minute of it. Now I even feel even worst for Sango, poor her only a few in minutes in heaven with him. Kagome I completely understand where she is coming, but I bet she won't attempt to kiss again, unless Sesshomaru instigates a kiss. Satomi she doesn't completely trust Sango and Kagome with telling them she's pregnant. Hopefully she tells the girls that they can be there for moral support,which she's going to need more than anything. Naraku I do feel bad for, it seems he never gets a break. Something always happens to him, now that Sango's in the picture. Maybe that would help him get stronger, because he would have something to live for, and protect. I'm glad Hakkaku died by Naraku's hand, that's what he gets for bullying him all those years. A surprise guest, I can't wait! Thank you for the awesome update!! Keep up the good writing!! :-)
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March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I feel bad for Kagome. She kissed his neck, for Christ's sake! I cant believe what a bitch Sessh's mom is. How dare she rape her SON! Her own blood! Shameless daughter of a bastard! Ugh! How can anyone be so fucking cruel? Did his father know he was being raped by his mother, trying to keep his son and her daughter safe? The guts! If I had any say, I would have killed them. Parents be damned. And Sessh left her hanging? How dare he become cold after that! And Kagome... the poor girl's life just got worse, and she doesnt even know it. I feel for her... update soon. I'm getting so distracted just thinking about this situation. I cant believe it... your words have an addiction quality. And Inuyasha was awesome. Jak is sooo cute. I wish I could terrorise him too.. He's fun. Whats wrong with Sango, anyway? I think I've asked you enough so, bye for now!
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March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
*Drool* Inuyasha and Jak, I loved the smutt!! I'm glad their finally out in the open about things. Although I see it with trials ahead. Such a great pairing and well done. Naraku and Sango I do feel bad for them. It seems their relationship will have alot of hardships. I just want to slap Miroku and Kohaku for their ignorance! Sesshomaru and Kagome their intimacy is going to be a problem. But I do know a solution to their problem, if Kagome can feel his pain through her powers. Then she can obviously take it away maybe not the memory, but pain the memory causes. But its just my mind working over time, hehehe! Thank you for the wonderful update! Keep up the amazing writing, you do! :-)
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March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Kuroi Kirishima
All of your readers should go check it out, I like the story already. GrimLyght is not giving any clues of who she will be pairing in this story. But I have a feeling its going to be interesting turn of events. I like the idea of being stranded on an island. What would it be, if not for our favorite characters to be in this sticky situation, talk about survivor one on one, lol! If anything GrimLyght hasn't disappointed us yet. So, go read the first chapter, and I promise it will leave you wanting more. :-)
All of your readers should go check it out, I like the story already. GrimLyght is not giving any clues of who she will be pairing in this story. But I have a feeling its going to be interesting turn of events. I like the idea of being stranded on an island. What would it be, if not for our favorite characters to be in this sticky situation, talk about survivor one on one, lol! If anything GrimLyght hasn't disappointed us yet. So, go read the first chapter, and I promise it will leave you wanting more. :-)
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March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Even I have always loved winter. Though I never thought about it the way you described it, but I felt it. I felt as if I was standing looking outside instead of Kagome... I totally agree with you on that one. And Naraku and Sango, oddly enough make a good couple. But what I'm dying to read id Sessh and Kag. The progress is slow but I wanna know more about them. And does Kagura get together with Kouga? What happened with Ayame? And please... please, give me a kiss to think about... even a peck from Kag would work.. please.. I want to see some sexual tension than awkward tension.. Sessh is a little to OOC but I don't know why it just suits him in some ways.... Anyway, I think this is the longest review I have ever given anyone.. I'm dying to get something from them. Something a little bit more than amazing, shy glances... Onegai! Ja for now... Enjoy!
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving the direction this fanfiction is going in. The way you build the relationships between the characters isn't rushed and flows very nicely. I am excited for your next update C:
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect you to update so soon, thank you. Finally Kagura lefted Miroku, no offense. But I can't wait for her and Kouga to get together. Satomi and Bank I'm glad their keeping, despite the hell they will go through to keep the baby. Naraku and Sango, I sheded a few tears as well, no joke. Beautifully executed between them. I know its getting risky for them, I just hope neither one gets hurt. But what would it be without some drama, lol! Inuyasha and Jak is still kind of rocky, and I like it! Of course you know, I support the smutt, no need to ask me twice lol! At last, Sesshomaru and Kagome is so intense and unsure, I love it, that's it taking time to blossom. Keep the amazing writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. :-)
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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I love how you're showing that every couple has different issues but are trying. I think the way you are slowly building a relationship with Kagome and Sesshomaru is great. Them really only sharing one secret at a time is believable. It's not rushed or fake feeling which I like. You have the perfect blend for it to seem real. Although I have to say I really want Miyo to die horribly. Just a wrong bitch.