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Please please please update really great story

Please update soon!!!!! This is a really good story!!!! There are many parts in which I couldn't help but fall over laughing at thecomedy you wove into this!!!!! It's awesome!!! :) :) :)

When are you going to finish this story. I would love for you to finish it. My email is rosalindrogers75@gmail

Amazing story can't wait for the other chapters!
I hope it isn't a long wait!

Sorry I haven't updated in so long got caught up in reading this amazing story.
It's awesome and I can't get enough of it!
Now I understand the story much better after the flashbacks, so great!

I love your story my favorite character is kags, satomi, and seshy.
Naraku is so bad and cool love his character, oh and amazing story
Can't get enough of it, so great!!!

I really do like bits and pieces of this fanfic but there are many glaring problems I can't get passed. For one thing I don't mind Sesshoumaru being the victim but he really seems like a giant baby in the way he acts. And further more your portrayal of Kagome is atrocious. You make her seem like a judgmental sheep, its like she can't make her own mind. And everyone rags on her for defending Inuyasha when they all should know that neither one of them knows the truth about Shessoumaru's abuse. The lack of common sense and reasoning makes everything seem sloppy. I don't like being rude but Kag/Sess is my favorite pairing and while this fanfic has some good points the bad one just makes it lackluster. I hope I didn't insult you too much but I also hope you learn from this and take better care in holding up a characters expectations.

Omg i love this story... it really is one of the best animes on here... i hope u update sooN... if zo shoot me over an email and let me know lol!!! But i really cant wait for the next update!!!

I love it the Inu/Jak pairing is awesome I want hear more about them.

I love this story and would love to see more , I cant waitg to see what the other chapters hold