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for Hime no Aisu

by GrimLyght

person Penguins
schedule August 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I read this a few years ago and recently decided to read it again to see if it's finished. I was surprised it didn't have the amazing ending we all hope for. But I understand that you could've grown out of writing fanfic or the fandom or both. I think we're all greatfull at having the chance of reading you're beautiful work.

person Pepsi
schedule October 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh, please update! I am not a big fan of AU, but this REALLY grabbed my attention. I'm glad I found it, and I hope you plan on continuing it.

person Geter
schedule January 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please continue. I read this story a few years back and I read it again. I can't wait to see what happens. Thank you for sharing your story and talent with your readers.

 

person KuroHime
schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Well Kagome is a little bit of a jerk, she's also arrogant and simple minded. If you could make her a little more compassionate and caring for others it'd be awesome. Reading this gives me thrills and is very exciting, although it started bad I hope Kagome can and will be kinder twords others and not judge at first site 

person Anonymous
schedule November 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Omg I love this story please update soon 

schedule November 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely adore this fic and was so happy to see it finally be an update!

person ATL
schedule August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Update soon!!!!!!! I L-O-V-E this story

schedule April 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great story please keep writing
schedule January 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Omg! It's good to see you haven't lost your touch at all! Amazing writing like always. You managed to pull your readers in once again. You are gifted in the art of story telling.

I freakin love this story! The plot and twists. And never a dull moment that's for sure. I must say this opening scene was well executed on your part. It was good to see Kouga give a prep talk to Kagome when she needed it. Really showing another side to him. A great way to start this off. Naraku and Sango make such a cute pairing in this fic. I can't help but love them. Their dynamics work so well together. Light and darkness. Miyo I can't stand her and what she did to Sesshomaru. I can't wait for her demise. Who knew Sango was promised to different people. I'm was like no way!! Lol! All this light shedding on Miyo and what she's done. I mean it's eerie to read but I wouldn't have this story any other way. I love the details you put forth in this chapter. I'm never disappointed reading your fics!

All the elders made me laugh. I really liked that you threw them into the mix. Showed diversity, all with their own personalities. I enjoyed it immensely! Naraku's mother I really do felt her. Because she was indeed a kind hearted person. I wish there was a way to bring her back. And Sesshomaru's father is MIA makes me wonder when his appearence is going to be. I can't wait for it though. Hana on the other hand I can't help but think if she will end up with Take or Tatsu. Omg! That would be a twist. Also, I can't wait for some Sesshomaru and Kagome action. Me and my thoughts lol! And don't judge me lol!

All friends coming together and showing strength was really touching. All have suffered and I do believe things must have a peaceful ending. I can't explain how much this brings to light a lot of things. And you executed it so well! I'm glad to see yor writing again! Keep up the good work. And rush things! I know you have a life outside of fanfiction. I appreicated the time you took out of your schedule to give us a chapter! You're freakin awesome! And don't forget that my friend! ;-)
person Niecy
schedule December 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!!!!
I am SO glad to see you continuing this story. It is one of my absolute favorites and i had been checking back for updates. I hope everything in your life is going well. Keep up the great work.
Niecy