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Ohhh fast update! Thank you! *calls back the dogs* uhh... oh... yeh, never mind. >.>

I loved how you went with it and made InuYasha screw Kouga out of anger, it suits their relationship better. Good job! *passes you cookies*

Oh and don't worry, I usually don't even read PWP since I like some sort of story in the fics I read but I couldn't pass up an InuxKouga fic since I haven't read one in like... forever? xD

Wow, I have to say I've liked your artwork on y!Gal but your writing skills might just give your drawing ones a proper run for their money. I love the way this is written, somehow it is so very believable, so very canon. Kouga approaching Kagome first, she not quite being able to approach Inuyasha about a fantasy that she'd most certainly harbor, and Kouga managing to taunt Inuyasha into sex. Excellent work, I can't wait to read more!

I'm pretty sure you are officially obligated now to update this fic soon. I read it. I love it. UPDATE! :D

First, and this is silly, but I feel I must thank you for the opening line being Kagome drinking tea. It reminded me with a jolt that I had water boiling on the stove for tea, myself, LOL. How quickly I can get distracted with the prospect of a new story to read. Anyway, after I took care of that and came back to read this chapter, I must say I find it unbelievably refreshing that you had Kouga sitting Kagome down and discussing things, like two mature adults. It wasn't Inuyasha and Kagome in the middle of getting it on out in the woods, enter Kouga, naked and with a boner, and something smoldered in both Inuyasha and Kagome's eyes and so they didn't protest when he randomly just up and joined them. This sort of thing, if you're going to bring a third person into the bedroom, does need to be discussed maturely, and agreed upon, in advance. And I find that I can understand Kouga's dilemma, wanting to be dominated but unable to show such a weakness among his people. Heaven forbid he ask an underling in the wolf pack to mount him. It'd plunge the hierarchy into chaos. Of course, there's bound to be a little chaos at home when Kagome braves bringing up what Kouga had proposed, supposing she gets brave enough to bring it up before the week is out. Otherwise, Inuyasha's in for one hell of a surprise in a week's time. But obviously he'll agree, or this story wouldn't even exist, and I for one am looking forward to reading all the 'activities' you have planned in future chapters. ;-) Besides all that, the writing style itself is also excellent. It reads like you actually speak English and comprehend proper capitalization and punctuation. That basic skill is alarmingly absent in many a fanfic, and I won't give those hack jobs the time of day, regardless of story content. So two thumbs up! One for subject matter, and one for quality. :-)

You'd better update this or I'll sic my dogs on you! :3