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for Kintsukuroi

by LordYouko

schedule June 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well we better not have to wait as long for the next update, LOL. You're back! Yay! I know real life can be a bitch sometimes. I'm glad that, whatever was going on that kept you away from us, you're able to write again now and will be writing more frequently again. Since this story only had two previous chapters I just reread them both to refamiliarize myself with the precise details I might have otherwise forgotten, so going through all three chapters together I can definitely tell you that the writing style seems exactly the same. Just like riding a bicycle, you picked it right back up, no problem at all.

So...I'm guessing Sesshoumaru probably didn't mean to poison Inuyasha, otherwise he would've given him the antidote. He'll probably be pissed at Inuyasha for ignoring his pain once it got so bad, although from the hanyou's perspective, I completely understand why he did. He probably didn't realize it was truly serious, either. But hopefully a part of Sesshoumaru, even if it's just a secret part he thinks to himself but doesn't express out loud, feels guilt and remorse for almost accidentally killing his favorite pet. I still remember the fiasco with child Inuyasha's first new moon night, during a thunder storm no less, and Sesshoumaru's reaction when he realized the human boy was still his same little puppy, and how he had so easily and stupidly forsaken him. Sesshoumaru is definitely capable of feeling remorse for his heartless and/or careless actions when the moment truly calls for it. This situation is a little different, of course, because Inuyasha did not feel hated or cast out by his master. He thought it was only a stupid bite and was being harsh on himself for being too 'weak' because it was hurting him. Hopefully Sesshoumaru also feels some pride in Inuyasha for being able to endure it for so long. It was carelessness on his part because his own inner beast got riled up at Inuyasha's possessiveness. Clearly the reason Sesshoumaru is so against finding a mate, and is not being too bothered by his seasonal heats as an unmated male, is because both he and his beast are content with their current "situation" LOL. Not that I can really see him making Inuyasha his official mate. Like you said when you were contemplating mpreg, it wouldn't change their relationship all that much. This Sesshoumaru will never truly love this Inuyasha. But I definitely love this story! So glad to see you back and writing again. Keep it up!

person Roseanna
schedule June 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful to see an update to this story! I really enjoyed the prequel "Want to be your Slave," and I wanted to see the continuation with this story. Since it had been a while from the time I read the first two chapters and the Chapter 3 you posted, I can say that your writing style is pretty much the same as it was before. I look forward to the future updates!
person Kiochii
schedule February 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Dude I implore you please bring us the next chapter this story is to good to die and burn! unless its inuyashas body burning with lustful heat as sesshomaru pounds into him in an attempt to sow his seed of power within the lithe body beneath him. . . . . I mean~ please continue so I can see how you work this all out for Inuboy and Sessy. Love the story and cant wait for more!
person fan
schedule August 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love where this is going, well written and your cliff hangers always leave the reader wanting more
person INU_luver
schedule July 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh PLEASE UPDATEEEEEE
person syndey
schedule April 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter pleaz your killing me and all your fans i love this story
schedule July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE! This is just too good!
person Ryane Foxx
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Its been so long since I've read you work, then I went back and read want to be your slave and was so excited to see a sequel. I'm so in love with your style and method, all around wonderful work and can't wait to see what is in store for Inuyasha and Sesshomaru this time around :)
person Shaylan
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
it's so rare to read stories that are unapologetically D/S. Not only that, it comes with a good plot too. I love how you characterized Sesshoumaru. It's how I view him too. PLS write more!!!
I hope you go through with the MPREG. And I wouldn't mind the beastiality too. In fact, I would expect it, especially with their nature.
Thank you for the story. And again, more please!!!
person sanguigno
schedule January 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooo I am so excited for this story! Please update as quickly as you can =)