rate_review Reviews

I liked the story the last few chaps were interesting.

great story but the ending wasn't what I thought It would be though sad sigh

i love this story, i have all of your posted work and i must say i am hooked.
i loved the way this story flowed and the pairings made me smile and love the fate that you gave them. the happy ending was earned and well deserved because of the hardships they endured.
please post another story soon i love your work and cant wait for another.

Your stories, from what I've seen, while having good ideas are very confusing. They read like snippets of ideas that weren't fully developed and work more as a guideline than an actual fic. Nevertheless, I must commend you for your originality and must compliment your had for dialogue. The cadence and word choices sometimes were very good. Other times it was a bit flat due to lack of context. Flow overall was good on a micro level.

While I was reading this I was confused at 1st because each chapter seemed to leave out so much information about what occurred between jumps in time & I kept wondering what was actually going on during the time jumps but as I continued to read it I found myself looking forward to finding out what would happen next & in the end I really enjoyed reading this story. There are still things I can't help wondering about but this was a very good story & I'll probably read it again.