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February 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story and I just now figured out how to review. I've been on this site for so long but I never knew anything other than posting and editing my stories. I'm so used to the original fanfiction.net that I didn't have a clue about adult-fanfiction.org that I couldn't manage stories or anything, but not I know. I still don't know what DragonPrints are though.
I will defenitley revew your sequel oh and you might want to put the tag on this story as "Complete" instead of "WIP" it can be misleading.
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July 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can not wait to read more.
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February 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ah this chapter made me cry! Poor Naraku and Kagome its almost like they are already one body and soul. I hope they make up soon im not sure I can take anymore! Cant wait for next week#
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February 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thats it! Omg I have been waiting for a story like this! You had me hooked since the first chapter and I couldnt put it down! I cantt wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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February 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You hate us i am dying inside
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February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please please please dont let this end withcrying i want happy endings foe them an babies lots of creept babys lol
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February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion, this is a really great story, artistically and technically. Artistically speaking, you use balance the range of characters available with one another and you have them interact in a believable manner. Further, you describe a complex plot with lots of twists and turns. Technically speaking, your grammar and punctuation are very good, as well, and you know how to use italics and underlines to accentuate appropriate parts of the characters' dialogue.
I love that Kagura gets a part in this story; she's my favorite female IY character. To me, she's like a rose with cyanide-covered thorns, beautiful and deadly at the same time. If Naraku is to survive your story arc and end up with Kagome, I hope that Kagura survives as well and pairs with InuYasha rather than Sesshomaru, and has lots of cute half-dog wind babies with him!
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February 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story. Since I found it, I haven't stopped reading it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
i went to hit the next button and my heart stopped!!! please update soon! i am in love with this story!
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January 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Talk about hot yet sensual!! This fic is amazing and I'm enjoying your own spin off of inuyasha! The depth and portrayal of each character is amazing and so close to the actual character. Except for those ooc moments. But even then I could image it as you've written it. Thanks for an awesome fics!! Can't wait for the next update!!