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December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just read the first chapter and I'm already intrigued by where you're going to take this. One suggestion, though. I had a bit of confusion as to who was talking because you'd have Inuyasha talking and then put Sesshomaru's thoughts in the same paragraph. It'll make make it much less confusing and more cohesive if Inuyasha's thoughts and him talking are in the same paragraph and Sesshomaru's in different paragraphs. Just a suggestion. I'll still be reading. Can't stop when I'm so intrigued :) Keep up the good work!
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November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story especially with all of Sesshoumaru's firsts. It is wonderful and I don't want it to end.
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
gran capitulo me gusto mucho eres increible tienes mucho potencial para esribir
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October 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!! I'm so happy that you posted your stories here! I love the freedom of this site! You can be as nasty and dirty as we want! (lol= ;3)
It's been fun reading these stories again!
B reading U!
It's been fun reading these stories again!
B reading U!