rate_review Reviews

I'm happy with the developments in this chapter. Though I think things won't go as sesshomaru plans.

I second everything Kain said. I'm also rooting for Inuyasha at this point. I really hope Sesshomaru doesn't use the safety of Kagome's friends against her. He needs to work a lot harder at not being cruel. Beating Sango to a pulp does not qualify. Raping her was pretty horrendous, but he even had her hanging from the ceiling, which would be pretty painful, especially when you've been left that way unconscious. I'm hating on Sesshomaru, but I still really want to know what happens next.

That was a beautiful update. I'm so glad that Sesshomaru actually took the time to listen to Kagome's plea for their pup's life, only to discover something even more miraculous! The fact that he seems to be listening to his heart and instincts more than the male side that wants her to be submissive to hims shows he has so much potential to make their relationship work out. They're off to a rocky start - shoot, Kagome still doesn't know it's him.

Now, I'm not pleased with the way things are going for Sango, and if she does manage to meet her demise the next day, Kagome will NEVER forgive Sesshomaru. Nothing will ever make Kagome forgive him for killing her best friend, regardless of what Sango did. I like the captain of the guard, though. If Miroku wasn't around I'd say that this could be the beginning of something quite fierce. But that's me, LOL. I'm always one for the odd pairings.

Love it, really good story, makes you want to read more. :)

Welcome back, nice update.

I hate AND like the demons in the very same breath, they obviously have a different standards and view on mating/rape and want to protect and serve Kagome but their ass back words logic and lack of understanding on just why Kagome is responding the way she is is only going to serve to make her hate them more. And if she finds out what they have done and are planning to do with Sango, then as another reviewer pointed out, she will never forgive them. Mighty big of Kagome to care about a child that was conceived through rape but it goes to show how much compassion she has. Inuyasha seems to be on the wrong trail and I am actually rooting for him to find and rescue his friends and give Sesshoumaru an ass kicking since you have written him very positively here. I like this story because it's believable with Kagome not just magically falling for her rapist like a few other stories unfortunately have and actually holding a justifiable grudge and not making things easy by submitting. Anyone in her position would have tried to escape and Sessh and the other demons in the castle have only themselves to blame.

-waits patiently for next chapter

I can't wait for the next update.

OH MA GOD!! that was some chapter. i very very good chapter.i wonder what is going to happen next, will sango survive what sesshomaru is doing to her, will kagome find out? so many questions please update soon

I love your story! And I hope you update again with more!!!

I'm seriously loving this!!!!

Pleeease update!!! :D

Great story so far!! I was sad to what happened to the pups and never expected it... but I love the way you manage the characters, their responses and their surroundings. Keep up with the good work!! I want to read more of this story.