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I had to reread this story since it is so good :) Keep up the good work even tho its been a while since your last update, i cant wait till its updated again. So many questions left unanswered.

I generally don't write reviews till i reach the end but i much enjoyed rhis story and i look forward to you continuing on with the next chapters.

He does have a plan and he had your friend abused and he raped you and no, I can't allow you to forgive him. That would be so awful. Feel some feelings, go ahead. He's your mate and you can't help that, but don't forgive him or let him have a moment's peace. He doesn't deserve it.

Hello. I assume that you are dead because you said you'd be back in a week but it has been much longer than that. Still, I want you to know that Kagome must not forgive Sesshomaru. She should take her kids and go home. If he survives the couple hundred years, he may understand why she hates his guts. I get that they are mates but still, I'd never forgive the guy. He raped her, forced her into a marriage, got her pregnant, sealed a major part of who she is, took her free will, torture her, and then demands loyalty and obedience. Heck yea, that's unforgivable.if you are still alive and would like to contact me, I go by the name shishiwastaken on fanfiction.net and archiveofourown.com. you can also email me at the email provided above. Unless you're dead. Then, please dint contact me because that would be scary.

I wonder if you're dead... you haven't updated in forever and even after checking your page I find no updates. Where have you gone to? I really like your story and wish that you would finish it or st least tell me where I can find a current chapter. I'm ready to move on!

Taking who she is and suppressing it for his own needs? Pretty unforgivable. I don't even know if you are even alive to read this...

Usually when fanfic writers choose a Sess/Kag the stories almost always take on the same flow. Kagome loves Sesshomaru, her friends all move into his castle and everyone lives happily ever after. I almost didn't read your story when I found it was another Sess/Kag but now that I've read through it all I'm refreshed. Your writing is a breath of fresh air. Sesshomaru's character is well rounded and dynamic. Making readers love and hate him at the same time. The twin thing, prematurely in the story line, was pretty typical for a Sess/Kag but I wasn't as bothered by it as I normally am just because your writing is good enough to back up the idea. I love that it's not happily ever after and Kagome's friends are struggling a great deal. My only real advice is that when you kill someone, keep them dead. The dead, alive, dead, alive is predictable and boring. Focus instead on Kagome, her turmoil, Sesshomaru's turmoil, ect. Don't make it easy for Sesshomaru to get away with all this crap that he's pulled. I can honestly say that I'm in love with your story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully, it's a long one! Sesshomaru's mother is an exciting twist.

I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I really would love to see where you are taking it. You're a really good writer and I know a lot of people are waiting on the next chapter. Hope you keep going!

Please update soon!!

I am so glad to see that Koga and Inuyasha are alive again! I feel bad for what happened to Sango, but at least she got a reprieve now. Hopefully something bad will happen to Katsutoshi for what he's done, just hoping. Good job!