rate_review Reviews

This seems like an interesting story but it seems like it will be a sad one. I try to stay away from stories that are sad, tragic or full of angst. If the story is going to keep in this there with Sessh already disliking her, not wanting anything to do with her or with the pup she is now carrying then, it doesn't look like there will be any romance or .... happiness ............

I like the idea of the story, but there's a lot of spelling mistakes and some parts don't make sense because of it. Please keep going though :D

Once again I do like your story! I do recommend revising it because of grammar errors but you have a good concept. I will be waiting on your next chapter for this story as well. I am interested in other stories you have/will write

You really need to get a beta because this is very hard to read and it seems like you might have a good idea to get out.

I feel like it needs work, good idea just not much detail alto of rushing as well