rate_review Reviews

Wow another first for me. I actually like the pairing and am a little freaked that I do (lol), but you've done a wonderful job. Keep up the good work. ^_^

Well, this is interesting. I'm glad you're re-writing it as I do like the story. Only one criticism for this chapter: new readers will have NO idea what is going on. I just read it and, since it's been awhile, it seems like the first time. I'm going "umm, why was Inuyasha just spanked? What's going on, I'm confused". basically, I think you jumped the gun a little bit here. More introspection on Inutaisho's part, thinking about why he's doing this earlier in the chapter would be awsome and clear most of it up. When you had it later, it did clear up a bit of the confusion, but it just seemed a little late. GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!