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for The Snow Angel

by SunsetMiko

person nari-chan
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i have always in a way pitied kagura, being chained to her master as she is. but i never thought she was a good match for the lord of the west. so her pining after him always kina made me have mixed feelings. i hope that she does not try anything silly when she is free and think that she can win the lords heart.
please update again soon
person nari-chan
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
cool so we are getting 2 nannies and one is a potential mate to inuyasha? awesome ! and i almost pity the old lady of the west, what goes around comes around and this is a vary big case of karma for her. though i don't think that she should be neglected that no matter how bad she treated people. well please update again soon i cant wait to read more :)
person nari-chan
schedule March 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yay their mated! i cant wait to read what's next for the lord and lady of the west :)
please update again soon i cant wait to read more
person debjani.halder23
schedule March 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yo! I didnt know i'd find you here.. excellent story by the way.. you entrance me by the way of your writing.. its mindblowing...
person nari-chan
schedule February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
aww i loved his reaction and i cant wait to get down to the fun part :)
thank you for updating and i cant wait to read more :)
person nari-chan
schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so what does this look like? im dieing to know!!! please update again soon i am shivering in anticipation for what is to come!
PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON !!!!
person Skylar
schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay update! They honna b mates! Finally!
person nari-chan
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so who is this mystery nanny that kogame wants? i hope its someone we know and can shock us all he he he
well thank you for the update and i cant wait to see what will happen next for the lady of the west and her nanny interviews and he impending mating
person nari-chan
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
aww that's so sweet. i cant wait for the mating and the nanny interviews. please update again soon :)
person drockz
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice composition. I expected it to be a bit more graphic due to the fact that its on adult fanfiction and not fanfiction but i still like it.