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April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay new story!
I love it already. I'm so happy that awful goat demon got what was coming to him. I love how you write young Sess, I think it's very accurate to how I would imagine him at such an impressionable time in his life. As with "Want to be Your Slave", I'm really impressed by the chemistry you create between Taisho and Tsukiko. It's perfectly believable and so amusing. You get me laughing aloud whenever they're together, lovingly frustrating the other to no end. I like this Inuyasha as well. He's got a little more of the classic spunkiness of the Inuyasha from the series, but he's also at that impressionable age where he could become anything. I think it's great that he's the first one to have the pervy thoughts, it makes him even cuter.
I think my favorite part was when Sess made Inu his own plate of food before eating his own food. That was so endearing. I'm extremely looking forward to Sess approaching Taisho about the birds and bees, and I'm also very much looking forward (fearfully) to the return of Tsukiko. Should be... interesting, to say the least.
Cannot wait for the next chapter!
P.S. Also eagerly looking forward to the sequel of "Want to be Your Slave" :D
I love it already. I'm so happy that awful goat demon got what was coming to him. I love how you write young Sess, I think it's very accurate to how I would imagine him at such an impressionable time in his life. As with "Want to be Your Slave", I'm really impressed by the chemistry you create between Taisho and Tsukiko. It's perfectly believable and so amusing. You get me laughing aloud whenever they're together, lovingly frustrating the other to no end. I like this Inuyasha as well. He's got a little more of the classic spunkiness of the Inuyasha from the series, but he's also at that impressionable age where he could become anything. I think it's great that he's the first one to have the pervy thoughts, it makes him even cuter.
I think my favorite part was when Sess made Inu his own plate of food before eating his own food. That was so endearing. I'm extremely looking forward to Sess approaching Taisho about the birds and bees, and I'm also very much looking forward (fearfully) to the return of Tsukiko. Should be... interesting, to say the least.
Cannot wait for the next chapter!
P.S. Also eagerly looking forward to the sequel of "Want to be Your Slave" :D
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April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing! Your characters are always so well thought out and the plot is exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story with a great start.I cant wait to see what else happens.So many ways to go with this.
How will Sessh' mom take this?
how will the rest of the castle take a halfling in it?
oh!what trouble Inu can get into that Sessh would have to answer for(inu being his)
I look forward to seeing the update and whst you have in store for Sessh and Inu
How will Sessh' mom take this?
how will the rest of the castle take a halfling in it?
oh!what trouble Inu can get into that Sessh would have to answer for(inu being his)
I look forward to seeing the update and whst you have in store for Sessh and Inu
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, cute uke pervy inuyasha is sooo hot!!!! I loved the two chapters. Oh course sesshomaru is his awesome self as well. Hope you update soon !!
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy Sess's and Inu Yasha's characterizations. The core of who they are are IC which really allows for such wonderfully different and nuanced characterization choices you've made. Wonderful stuff.
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April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it, I can see myself reading it till the very end ^_^ keep up the good work
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April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. I can not wait for the next chapter
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April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, and how vulnerable inuyasha is. I love how you always manage to capture the feelings of a slave. It's also pretty awesome how sesshoumaru still cares, but isn't OOC. Please keep writing :)
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April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Inuyasha is such a cute little perv. I just love him
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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's wonderful! How like Sesshoumaru to be so out of the loop! This chapter was really well written, me-thinks. I also love that you have Inuyasha as the one with the crush (I mean, come on - who wouldnt have a crush on Sesshoumaru?). I look forward to the next chapter!