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by SunsetMiko

schedule April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOL, devious little Kagome. But hey, when life just hands you a situation like that, roll with it, right? Hopefully Inuyasha catches on fairly soon.
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOL, he's got a point. She might have been concerned, but not concerned enough to stop him. Busted! LOL. I imagine he can probably hold his breath for a long time; he only came up for air when she pushed him away. Something tells me it might be Kagome holding her breath pretty soon here. ;-)
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done so far, I'm really liking this story and the way that Inuyasha and Kagome are interacting. Now I can't wait to see what all else Kagome...knows...about :P Excellent work!
schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cool update. I wasn't expecting us to jump away from the bedroom scene all of a sudden, but I like where you're going with this. Looking forward to the next update.
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was sweet. Wonder how long before one or both of them notices how their naked naughty bits should be in fairly close proximity to one another, LOL. Can't imagine that's where you're going to stop the story. Looking forward to the next chapter! :-)
schedule April 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omg poor Inuyasha! I hope she doesnt sit him to death..i actually choked on my soda at the part where it says that Inuyasha choked on Kagomes panties! I was like OMG! very very good! cant wait to read more
schedule April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Shit, if I were Kagome I'd be debating for like two seconds, and then the panties would be off, LOL. Got a feeling that's what's going to happen next chapter, too. Looking forward to it!
schedule April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ho-ho! This is getting good. Keep up the awesome work! :-)
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schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So hot!
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Need another chapter, damn it! Poor Inuyasha!