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Awww...that was sweet there at the end there. Wasn't expecting him to almost break his dick, LOL, and I can only imagine how much that must hurt, being a girl myself, but at least he thankfully didn't actually injure himself, and like you pointed out it enabled him to last longer, so blessing in disguise. Good update!

Hahahahahahaha, sealed for freshness?! That had me "LOL"ing for real! Even though virginity wasn't really a big deal in Feudal Japan like it was in some other countries, at least for simple village girls, I loved this chapter and Kagome's reaction. I think that was just the right amount of seething rage that then melted into resigned acceptance of Inuyasha being an idiot, LOL. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Why do I get the feeling this chapter's working title was "Or how Inuyasha learned about vibrators" :P Great few chapters, I can't wait to see how far Inuyasha has stuck his foot down his own throat, and I definitely can't wait to read about Kagome's special packages hehe. Excellent work!

LOL, what a question, but hopefully Kagome won't get mad (or at least not too mad) and realize he's just uneducated and confused. I'm sure he didn't mean it the way it sounded, LOL.

Did it again; missed a chapter...not so bad though when that meant I got to read two in a row. And what a pair of chapters, indeed! LOL. I really like that you're going out of your way to illustrate the use of protection. Her not getting pregnant yet is usually avoided in stories that think about that issue at all with some kind of fantastical excuse, like he can only get her pregnant during the full and new moons, etc. Either that or it apparently doesn't even cross the author's mind, and they go at it like bunnies with no consequences. I'd rather read a story where she accidentally gets pregnant, in that case, even though I'm not really that partial to baby stories, but it'd be way more realistic and teach the younger readers about consequences. The way you're doing it here is perfect. Although thought the scene in the store was too funny. Especially her opening the boxes of what I assume were 'personal massagers', to see what shapes they were, LOL. Definitely looking forward to the next update!

Away from the computer for a few days, and when I get back, I have two new chapters awaiting me. Yay! This story is progressing nicely. Definitely looking forward to where it goes from here.

So cute!

Love it!

I think you posted two chapters in wrong story

So is Snow Angel and this story connected then? I was really confused when, Pop, suddenly sesshoumaru is in the story when he hasnt been the entore time.