rate_review Reviews

I like this story, and I can't wait to see where you take it. Thanks for sticking with it.

I love how dark you've created Sesshomaru to be. Your a very gifted writer. I love how detailed a writer you are. I do hope you continue this story. Do you have any idea if Sesshomaru is going to stay the way he is now or is he going to do a massive 180? Again your doing a really great job. Please do continue.

I'm in love with the story! It flows with an fluid sensuality that is making me very interested! I agree Sesshomaru is a tad bit OCD but in all honesty, BDSM and blackmail suits his ruthless character so I don't think he's as far off the mark as we may think. Kagome is quite the vixen, strong willed, sweet and absolutely willing to save her family. I love the portrayals and the beautiful plot your weaving. The strip club was classy instead of cheap and seedy which I was excited about the raw creativity with the butterfly motif and how Kagome may be ashamed but transforms into a exotic queen dancing all while hiding it from her family. A little curious how her family hasn't figured out her side job with that much money coming in. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Omg I love this story. I know you may not love it but its really good. I believe that you are talented. I can't wait to see you write a chapter you love if this is something you don't love. Well hopefully you continue this story if not it was an extremely pleasure to read these chapters. (I read the first one again lol)

ooh that was a good chapter. though i can understand why you dont like it. some parts did feel forced others were much better, but all in all it was a very good chapter. i look forward to what kagome does while stripping for sesshomaru

Interesting story and to see how kagome deals with this problem with shessomuru. Looking forward to the rest of the story and different problems and solutions. If kagome finds a way out of the blackmail and if she an help her family still. Keep up the good work and looking onward to more.

I'd love it if you continued writing this story!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Please continue writing it. This story went quite differently than I expected. Please continue!!!! You are very talented.

Wow that is some beginning. Really good start. I like how everything flows. Sesshomaru is bang on being himself and what would happen if he were to black mail kagome into doing whatever he wants. I look forward to reading the next chapter

You should keep writing. It's a premise worth exploring.