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Is it me or are you totally sick and twisted, because apparently so am I, I love this amazing chapter! and such a quick update!!!!! Thankssssss and looking forward to the next chap

Just discovered this very hot story and love it, update soon, have to read more!!

Hey Doll, I just wanted to let you know that someone with a different username is publishing your story on fanfiction.net.

Exact same story with the same title and everything.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9988960/1/You-re-Mine

I really hope that it is you, I've followed this story from the beginning and really love it, and I really hope someone isn't claiming your wonderful story as their own.

I just thought I would let you know, since you haven't made any mentions of publishing this on ff.net.

Maybe when you get time you can shoot me an email and let me know what's up if you have time?

Hey maybe you could add this part to give sesshoumaru a twist from his obiediant lover...the lhone was ringing. That god awful crack from the whip. She silences it hesitates then sends him a message...'no sir' and turns it off and throws it away in a trashcan. Sesshoumaru finds the phone after being hell bent on finding his bitch. Its a hospital. He inquirie the staff and finds out her broter is sick... or please dont be offended if i did cross a line. Just my thoughts trailing out... i love this story im not sure how cold u wanted fluffy to be...mayne he could find her packed and trying to board a train. He finally gets her to say she needs money blah blah...he can go crazy and say he wont allow her. He would follow her making it impossable to find work at anything. He has more videos and pictures to blackmail her with. You know like with Kouga Nailing her on a staircase or something....yes to the threesome ...please! More muhahah!

Ooooh, man! Kagome is in trouble now!!! Hurry up and update again! I'm loving this. xD

Hehe, very nice. I like that Sesshomaru seems to be...slowly...developing a certain small degree of affection towards Kagome. Not that it should interfere with all his delightful kinkiness of course. And for the record, I'm most certainly in favor of a threesome, especially so if the extra partner happens to be Inuyasha or Kouga. Great work, I can't wait to read more!

Yay! I've been waiting for this story to be updated! I'm so happy that you've picked it back up! I really hope you continue it, It's one of my favorites. :)

i dont think you should fo this story into a treesome. I believe this story too crude but if you want to keep sesshomaru in character he will never allow someone else to touch what he think it's his. You can play with the idea but that wouldn't be like sesshomaru at all. Even the punishments are weird and childish for his personality.
Anyway good way to keep the story intense but try to fallow his personality.
Sorry for my grammar i speak spanish.

Not trying to be rude i seriously want to see this story to be a really good one. Just my opinion.
Keep writting!

Excellent!! Please keep it coming. I'm looking forward to the next part. :-)

Really enjoying this story so far! I love this paring way more than cannon. Really enjoying seeing sesshomaru's darker and more dominating side and at the same time seeing that he's also a generous lover when it's all said and done. I'm honestly not a big fan of a threesome, I just can't see sesshomaru wanting to share what he has so devoutly declared what is his.