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for You're Mine

by kittenchild

person Ali
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Those last chapters were awesome!!!! Update soon! I need to know what happens next!
person nikkei
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. i check back every other day to see if a new chapter had been added. :)
person katiekrm
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the smutless chapter. Sesshomaru was really pissing me off especially with that last punishment since her grades falling and her lack of sleep was his fault. Plus, it took him too long to look into why she was losing weight and so exhausted. I'm so happy she punched him.
person Rin
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Reallz looking forward to the next chapter, but wait...is she pregnant? Wait, wait wait, are you pregnant? if so, congrats:) get a house soon and get some rest, also it would be nice to get healthy again, lots of tea and fruits and you will be good to go in no time. all the best, and keep up the good work as always
schedule January 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. I love it from start until now and I cant wait to read more. :DDD
person Rin
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Of course I wanna review, awesome, I do not believe she was out of character, she was angry so it was really real, i love this chapter, i hope the next one comes soon again!
person beliefinkakashi
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking awesome! Sure he didn't know, but that still didnt give him the right to do so. Did the move and her putting in the hours at work clue him in that something is off!
Love it. Keep it up!
person Merely Truth
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your story is a delicious drama I love to read ! I can t wait to know how You will make Him catch Her again ...
^ ^
Thank you very much for your work !
A french mother,
Bonjour de le France !

Merely Truth
person sorrows amaranth
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this maybe my favorite chapter. I wish we got a little more from Sesshoumaru towards the end though. Oh well that's what updates are for. :)
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I had to review after this chapter, only because Kagome FINALLY let loose after the last straw. I hate seeing her being taken advantage of, and yes, I understand why. But I was so thrilled to see her get a back bone and tell finally tell Sesshomaru off. HOWEVER, I feel that she put herself in that place only because she doesn't want to burden others with her problems. I get that. Now Sesshomaru finally understands why she was they way she was, fatigue, malnourished and poor grades. Now he knows about Souta and he'd better do right by her and I hope he realizes his true feelings and soon.