rate_review Reviews

I wish you would write more

Oh god, this was the best fanfic ever! x)

Your story had a decent plot to it but I feel the name you used don't fit your story at all. With as quick as her and Sesshomaru matted she really wasn't that broken hearted. Also I feel you rushed it to much and it's lacking some finer details that you could have added. In one you said you didn't want to draw out the fighter but that is what most readers are looking for. I'm sure you have read books and other fictions. It's those details that the readers love in a fanfiction. Don't get me wrong your story was good but I honestly feel it could use a different title and more detail.

Are you kidding, that was a great ending, and very surprising to bring back their father. I have to say I loved it through and through, even if the chapters were somewhat short.

I love this story and can't wait to see what happens between Inuyasha Inuyasha and Kora Kora please update soon and tell me on kingofmonsters1@gmail.com so I will know

I found the fish attacking Inu Yasha's privates very funny. I can't wait for the next chapter. I do hope Sesshomaru rescues Kagome soon, and that her pups are unharmed.

Amazing story. Please continue writing. ^_^ It's not often I find a Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairing I can actually follow plotwise. Not to mention it doesn't have that oneshot turned story feel to it that makes the plot seem forced. I love it. ^_^ -WWMH-

Amazing story so far!!! When are you gonna post more!!??