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Good job on this story! Love your writing by the way. It's not everyday that you can read fanfiction with such interesting vocabulary. I would just say that maybe you could use something to distinguish between the present and the past. You can definitely tell which parts are which, by it will definitely be easier to read the transitions between the two.

On another note, I hope you continue writing this story! I've noticed that your other stories are pretty short, but I hope you keep going because this is really good!

Inuyasha has had such a sad life so far :( I really look forward to another update for this story soon. Sesshoumaru might be too smug to react to Inuyashas true form like the mage did, but I bet he's reacting in a different sort of way. LOL Thanks for all your hard work on this.

I'm looking forward to another update. I have enjoyed what you've given so far. The plot clues you've left behind leave me wanting answers to all the questions. Thanks for sharing.

I've read the first chapter on fanfic I enjoyed it there too and now I've just read the second chapter very cool! I can't wait to hear why his brothers didn't tell her he was there brother or if she's lying through her teeth... I just have one request though would you mind spacing your paragraphs a little more for me they kind of blend and I have to re-read it sometime twice just to make sure I've got the next word right. Thank You for sharing this story!

Great Job. Well done!!!