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Please when u update  Let me know at cupidslove.ray88@gmail.com please cause I don't know any other way of finding out seeing as I don't know how this website works. Thank u . Ps I love u story 

I've re-read this story at least four times because I like it that much, also because I keep hoping that maybe, somehow you added a new chapter and I didn't receive an email notifying me of the update. Please, please, please would you take pity on me and write another chapter or a sequel to this story! Please!!

First of all.. Please excuse any fatal grammar mistakes I'm gonna make while typing this review. I'm at work, I gotta hurry and I'm from Germany, so.. :D

There really are a couple of adjectives to describe Stray.. Exciting.. Touching.. Smexy (:3).. But my opinion changed rapidly with the last chapter. That scene at Kagomes grave was so extremely touching! I didn't expect a change of the plot like this at all.. Actually, I thought I was done with it as soon as Kouga said they were leaving the den. But you succeeded even in making this part acceptable! As for the rest of the story.. There's one word to describe it: hwrwr (:D). The way they continiously start to "like" each other more and more, I loved it.. And each time they were together before the mating-season scene.. I was like.. KISS ALREADY!!! Sooo awesome..

You gave me quite an amazing time reading all of it, I'm amazed of how great you were able to combine the REALLY AWESOME sex scenes with the rest of the really good plot. If it wasn't for the yaoi, I could actually imagine this being a sequel to The Final Act. It's just so sad you didn't write a sequel for the story.. Thanks anyway for that amazing piece of fan literature!! :)

I just wanted to say i absolutely loved reading every chapter of this story!!!!

great story! if the village is still that accepting to demons i can truly see them making a life there....though they would probably be more comfortable building their hut a bit outside of it at the forrest edge then right among the humans. as for ayame, isn´t she a manipulative bitch? and i´m sure time will tell what a big mistake she made - sure, her mate may be bigger than kouga but he´s also stupid, brash and everything but diplomatic. in short, that beneficial deal with the humans will soon be a thing of the past and probably even turn into violence. heck, i wouldn´t be surprised if some of kouga´s old tribe will leave the sinking ship so to speak and seek out their old leader - or maybe even try to get him back.

Oh I hate Kanta and Ayame. Why do I get the feeling the pack is going to go into ruin with them as leaders and everyone is going to go running back to Kouga with their tails between their legs. Also is there going to be Mpreg with Inuyasha and Kouga? It would be so funny to rub in Ayame's face that Inuyasha had his baby while she couldn't!!

I've read this entire story and truly love it. I must say that reading this last chapter however made me truly hate Ayame. Ayame was always just a there character to me like filler in the background and yet at the end of the story, I couldn't help but think during the first challenge Kouga should've exiled her and Kanta. However, the ending was sweet and therefore I focused in on that instead of wishing her head got chopped off. Great story.

Very interesting so far, look forward to reading more!!!

Awesome chapter. Love the lemon

Love it so far. There are far to few stories with this pairing. Update soon! ;D