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by Yashahime

person nea
schedule January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very very interesting! :-) Can't wait so see how this all goes. How much time will pass before they meet up again? Will Inuyasha be pregnant then? Looking forward to more!
person Kailover
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. The great Sesshomaru not wanting to leave InuYasha I like and with InuYasha still using his colourful language. Keep it up and looking forward to Chapter 2
person tritetrash106
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as you can! I love it so far; This story really gets me going!
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! So good!!!! Love it! Hopefully this is a series. Why Inuyasha doesn't want Sesshoumaru to cum inside him? Could it be there's MPREG???!!
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I read this story right before I went into work... and then I couldn't stop thinking about it!!! I'm really interested in seeing what you are going to do next. Good job capturing an audience!
person nchsmi
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...this was sexy as hell! Damn! The way you discribed the rough sex between the brothers was off the chain. I like the lead in to how complex the brothers relationship is. It's so involved, even InuYasha can't seem to understand it fully. Which, I feel just adds to the intensity of it. You did a really good job. But, I do have one question. It looks like there was more to act of Sesshomaru coming inside of InuYasha, other than InuYasha feeling dirty. If InuYasha always begged Sesshomaru not to do it, and he usually grants that one request. Why this time? Is it a way to lead into a possible M-preg? 7 or 9 more years go by and Sesshomaru comes back to find that he's left a little something behind? That would be interesting.

Great job, I can hardly wait to read the next chapter!

B reading U!
person Araiht
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting indeed. I'm looking forward to read more. Greetings.
person Maizy
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This looks so good. I hope you will update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG! THAT IS ONE OF THE BEST THINGS I HAVE READ IN A WHILE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UP-DATE ASAP BECAUSE I TRULY NEED TO READ MORE!
person lunamist
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a lovely beginning. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter (I hope there's a next chapter :) Thanks so much for sharing.

lunamist