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by Yashahime

person Silver
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story
schedule February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I figured you were planning to take the story the usual way, with Sesshoumaru coming to beg forgiveness and Inuyasha being traumatised with abandonment issues, but I find this last chapter very interesting, especially the fact that Inuyasha had one night stands and he's more or less normal about Sesshoumaru leaving and then coming back.

I love the idea with Lord of the East being Inuyasha's lover. Is there any chance you'd have Inuyasha take him as his uke, provided he agreed to be subservient to him and Sesshoumaru? Inuyasha would never put such a condition, of course, but Sesshoumaru might 'subtly suggest' it, considering the fact that Inuyasha would definitely miss being uke for the rest of their lives. And it would be a political advantage to Sesshoumaru too. They could be a happy couple + 1 ^.^

Looking forward to more. Update soon!

-LordYouko
person Vyper
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story especially since the two brothers mated. I hope to read more.
person tamshi
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
really loved it. the way you wrote the both of them was great, I enjoyed it a lot!
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. I enjoyed reading it.
person Dawn chase
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this chapter. I'm glad that the two made up. I can't wait till sesshomaru meets his daughter
person Kailover
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what a reunion. loved it. Sesshomaru's such a possessive ass but love him all the same. Keep up the good work
person KC
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well at least Sesshomaru did not "hurt" Inuyasha to much over the whole mess. I think Inuyasha would suprise Sesshomaru by being willing to wait for him to return if he really needed to leave for a bit. It seems to me Inuyasha would accept his leaving if he knew he would definitely be back.
person lunamist
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic update! I love reading this story and like how you're keeping dear old Sesshomaru in character. Even when he's being "nice", he's still has that fabulous quality of "assholishness"
person Dawn chase
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!!!!