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Aw won't we get to watch as they bring up these two imps and everything especially little Touga and is Sessh's momma gonna see them it sounds so adorably cute. I gotta admit I always find it kind of strange how so many stories have Inuyasha give birth it just seems weird to me I mean so many of them don't have him give birth from the same place as he got pregnant in like girls just because it's their bum although I personally don't see what the big deal is girl's give birth where they go to the bathroom so what's the big deal just can't figure it out. Instead they have him literally cut open now to me that actually doesn't make any sense because there is no point in making someone have babies if they can't come out naturally and cutting one self open or having someone else do it that isn't naturally. I mean he is a demon if he can have babies then it makes sense that it's not exactly like a females anyway right. Grant you the worst is when they turn him into a girl that is just silly I mean to completely change your gender it's one thing to change the hair,nails,ears and senses once a month but to change him from who he is to a girl that's when I tend to stop reading. Oh sorry I think I just started blabbering and forgot to stop. Anyway I loved little Touga and his big sister's reactions to him so adorable. I'll be waiting to see what else happens

that chapter was good... i am happy that inuyasha and touga made it through the birth.... keep up the good work and update when you can

I love Shippou in this story. He is a fun carefree playboy just the way I picture him to be as an adult. Love it all!

I hope you won't be offended to hear this but this was not well written. You have really innovative ideas in terms of the plot but you don't know how to put it across in a story. You tell your readers through the narrative point of view that this character is feeling so and so, instead of showing it. The characters' don't behave like real people who have to meet the future instead of already knowing what it is right from the beginning and enacting a drama to meet an inevitable destiny (in this case, everyone finding love and living happily ever after). This is beginning to read like Fifty Shades of Grey.

Love the chapter. Im happy that kanji has found someone he can be himself with in shippou. Good job bringing him into the picture. I love to read how other authors portray him as a adult. Great job..i can see him being a playboy..lol. im glad sesshomaru picked emily as heir...girl power afterall plus she is a copy of him. Sesshomaru and inuyasha relationship can be so confusing at times but what i see is that inuyasha can't forget the past and how he was treated by sesshomaru and sesshomaru ofcourse still can't express himself. These two have alot of problem but im sure they will work it out and find happiness together

That was sooooooo adorable. I probably shouldn't call a lemon adorable, but Kanji and Shippou are so cute. It was nice to read that Kanji seemed to have some ulterior motives to allowing Sesshomaru take his lands and that Sesshomaru was nice enough to tell Kanji, he was going to fix them though it would take time. At least the cute little uke did act like a lord in that moment. I think I squealed when Shippou stood up to Sesshomaru and said he wasn't going to let him touch Kanji anymore and Sesshomaru hiding his sweet side is also adorable. I hope there are more moments with Kanji and Shippou and perhaps Kanji both apologizing to Inuyasha for his actions and thank Inuyasha for raising his mate.

I enjoy this story a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for responding to my reviews.

Bravo for making Emily Sess's heir! It was unexpected and awesome, especially considering the fact that Sess knows Inu is pregnant with a boy. It will be amazing to see the interaction between Emily, an alpha and Sess's heir, and her little brother, especially after they are both grown up (I am just assuming here that you are going to write this story for that long, sorry.) You did a good job of showing what a spoilt brat she is right now, with the way she talked about the other elderly Lords at the council and how far she is from being ready to rule. It's true that Taisho chose Sesshoumaru without giving him a choice but he also trained Sesshoumaru hard for the post so maybe some good old military training is in order for Emily
The way Sess is going about killing people in the council is a little unrealistic; if he had that much power, he wouldn’t need a council, would he?

I also didn’t like that Sess considered giving Kanji away to Shippou, even though I see you may not necessarily have him go through with it in future chapters. Kanji only gave up his power and position to Sess under the condition that he would get to be with Inuyasha. It isn’t like an honourable person like Sess to go back on his word after he got what he wanted like a highschool girl; he’d never have been so powerful his word didn’t have any value.

Also, what is the deal with Inu and Sess. I thought I understood the dynamics between them in the start but I think I missed the point somewhere along the way. Do they love each other or not?
I hope to read more soon.

can't wait to read shippou's point of view.

once again very well written.... i am happy with the way the chapter turned out... I am happy that everything is going good with everyone.... please hurry and update as soon as you can

awesome story.. cant wait to read more about how it goes at the counsel when InuYasha, Emily, and Kanji are presented... please update as soon as you can