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You wrote that because of the bond Kagome would be the only woman for Sesshomaru even after she dies. Yet in this chapter, he would consider taking a whore on the side so he wouldn't force himself on Kagome. Um, a little contradiction there?

I hope you update soon, this story is really good and I can't wait to see what will happen next. I'm excited to find out what the pup will look like. I think you did a fine job explaining about how the midwife knew Kagome was pregnant. Since she will only be pregnant for around four months/18 weeks, because Sesshomaru is the father, versus a regular human pregnancy of 38-40 weeks, it would follow logic that she will physically be a little bit more than twice as far along than she would have been in a regular human fathered pregnancy. I wanted to clarify that Sesshomaru is only thinking of taking a whore on the side so he doesn't force himself on Kagome and harm her further, and that when Kagome does die of old age he will not be able to have another mate. So he isn't thinking of taking another mate when she dies, he is only thinking of her well being, saying that he would even take a whore on the side if he had to, that sounds to me like he doesn't want to but would for her. Is that what you were trying to convey? I hope I got it right:)
I really like this story, I haven't read one like this and it is quite interesting. There are very few small gramatical/punctuation errors, so it is easy to read and flows fairly well. I enjoy your writing and hope to see a new chapter soon! Keep up the great writing!

I liked this story thanks for wrighting it. I hope to read more chapters.

i luv it so far please tell me your gonna ad a new chapter two it please :} <3

Keep on writing

It is interesting how you wove hojo into the story. This fic sounds like it might have been inspired by the fic bloodstained. Why did kagome's stomach hurt right before she found out she was pregnant? And how would a dr from the feudal era know she was pregnant so early? Generally a physical exam can only tell pregnancy by the end of the first trimester... it seems that kagome isnt nearly that far along. I hope you dont mind all the questions. Those were just my thoughts while reading.

This has gotten really good. I like it better than the first time I read it. Please finish it. What will the pup look like? Boy or girl? Where will they be in the fight when Kagome comes close enough for him to know? Will that immediately end it? will the pup really be half?

Please update soon.

How can she be more mad about him raping her than him killing all her friends

I like this sightly fluffy side of Sess. Can't wait to read more