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for My Rival's Brother

by Neptunesdemon

person Bluesake
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Sessy was so uke and wanting! ^^x I kind of liked Kouga with him. Would love to see this continued.
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kinky, secretive, smut that takes place right under Inuyasha's nose! Love it! Great job of mixing Sesshoumaru commanding ,regal, arrogant, sarcastic personality with horny, pervy, uke characteristics! Also Inuyasha and Kouga personalities were well represented in this story. I loved Unexpected Circumstance and hope you are able to publish more stories soon!

schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I immensely enjoyed this one-shot even though it was mostly smut. I liked the build-up, the interactions between Kouga, InuYasha, and Sesshoumaru, the seduction, and of course,the actual sex. I also really liked the fact that it was Sesshoumaru seducing Kouga. Normally it would be the other way around with Kouga doing the seducing. As a fan of your Inu/Sess fiction (which I read on ff net a year ago or so, and I still need to catch up on it), I especially liked this one. I suppose, like you, I like the needy, uke Sesshoumaru. I also like the fact that he's still a man and acts like a dominant uke. That is so rare and when I come across stories with dominant ukes, I'm shocked and pleased at the same time. Great job and I intend to come back around to review the Inu/Sess one. Unexpected Circumstance, I think it was called.
schedule December 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was so freakin AWESOME!!!!!! I'm totally in love with your uke Sesshomaru. Even bottoming he is a force to be reckoned with.
person Seri
schedule December 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I wish it wasn't a oneshot ):
person Vyper
schedule December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hot story. I want to see Kouga get some more so hopefully there will be a sequil.
schedule December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
haha nice. I like Sesshomaru greedy :)
person lolly
schedule December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... I loved that you made Sesshomaru (don't think I spelled that correctly) uke. I am more than ready for your next update. Great work!