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for My Rival's Brother

by Neptunesdemon

schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I love this story, I hope You keep going with it. Even though I usually don't like Uke Sessh. But this is just too good. XD" And you do Kouga soo well! I wish I could write him that well... )_)" Hope to see another update soon. ^_^
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! Awesome update!! Hot Hot Hot!! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Bring on the plot!! But you better keep up the hot, sweaty, kinky, smexy stuff. ;)
So far we've had the bedroom, a coat closet in a restaurant, and Sesshomaru's office. Oh ya and the bondage video (delicious). Maybe next they could sneak into daddy's office and do the deed on his chair. (wink wink) Just a suggestion, he was the reason they rushed after all.
On a serious note: Thank you so much for your wonderful work of written art. You are a great writer and I am really enjoying your story. Please update as soon as you can.
person yohanita21
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely in love with this story. Who would've thought, seme Kouga and uke Sesshomaru. That's completely unheard off and absolutely delicious. Please update soon, I can't wait to read what's in store for this two naughty demons, and that vibrator!
person pumpkinpi
schedule February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Smokin sizzling hot hot hot, I loved it! More please:-)
person thieflord99
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
actually you portray uke sesshoumaru very well i really enjoy it, he still has his sesshoumaru's poker face just uke so in all the sesshoumaru yaoi i've read this is the best sesshoumaru portrayal i've seen in a long while keep it up!
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I never would have thought I'd like this pairing, but damn... rough public sex in a coat room?!?! Love! I really like what you've done with the characters. I don't feel like you've made Sesshomaru OC at all. Thanks for the update!
person InHumanLover88
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love story so far I love how you made Sess a Uke but still all alpha male
person kristig
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this! I didn't think I'd be into it, but its a pretty good pairing. Continue to update please.
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written, good premise, nicely paced.
person Angel
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please add a sequel to this with Kouga and Sesshoumaru and batteries lol. Keep up the good work! :)