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for My Rival's Brother

by Neptunesdemon

schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Everyday, I'm checking for an update ;u;
I've read this fanfiction over and over again and I really can't get enough of Sesshoumaru as a needy bottom.
person Starshima
schedule December 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
KICK ASS STORYY!!! KOGA&SESS AWEEEESSSOOOMMEEE ASS STORY!!!!
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, please...I need a new chapter ;__; perfect smut is perfect!
person person
schedule August 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Limo, all perfect.
person TeahouseBrony
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Very erotic and also well written. ME GUSTA.
person Guest007
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was AMAZING!!! :O Kouga thinking of Inutaishou of "Papa dog" always makes me lough XD If Sess going to get pregnant (don't want to put any ideas in your head but it says Mpreg XD) I am not sure if Kouga would still think so casually of him as "Papa dog" XD Everytime that movie pops in my head (I am not sure if the title is in english the same as in german though) "my bride her father and me" :D

Well..hope for more naughty sess and kouga soon ;D rrrrr ;D

xxx
person bluesake
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For some reason it won't let me log in but anyway. How is it that you updated this wonderful story and I did not know about it? I'm so glad that your writing more. Loving it a lot. I'm also looking forward to the mpreg tag you have up. hopefully? Can't wait for more
schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story and I'd never thought I'd like Kouga/Sesshoumaru. I'm a Naraku/Sesshoumaru fan (so I secretly loved the Nara/Sess innuendos xD) and I wouldn't be surprised if Naraku is actually interested in Sesshoumaru or maybe planning something heinous altogether. But I digress. I dig this story and I'm enjoying this pairing so far. If it was just smut then I would probably not enjoy it at all. I do like sex in stories, but if that's all there is to it, then I get bored. I love plot and you obviously have something going on here in this story. Great job. I must say I'm glad Kouga put Sesshoumaru in his "rightful place" and the driver at the end made me laugh. I'm also glad Kagome finally found out about InuYasha's cheating ass, too.

What's ironic about Sesshoumaru saying he'd never lower himself to having sex with a hanyou is that in Unexpected Circumstance, he lowered himself to TWO hanyous (even though one of those pairings wasn't consensual). xD The Sesshoumaru in this story would probably die if he saw himself in your Inu/Sess story. Which...I do love. I still need to finish Unexpected Circumstance and I intend to. I love your work. =]

Btw, Chapter 4's format looks off. The words are all running together, which is strange because when I read that chapter, everything was spaced normally.
person Inuhime
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! OMG !! I was soooo happy when I saw this update, you have no idea! Yay! that was amazing btw. Please update soon, I can not wait too see how they deal with daddy XD"""
person Tee
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY REALLY REALLY WISH YOU WOULDN'T DO THIS TO ME I NEED MORE CHAPTERS. I REALLY MISSED YOUR STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UP-DATE ASAP!