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First thing's first... I am so excited you updated, and added a new chapter!!! I'm a huge fan of your story, and now is really getting interesting! I hope Sesshomaru confronts his father, and lets him know that he won't be marrying anyone, and that he's not breaking things up with Kouga! In regards to the male pregnancy, my opinion is that it really doesn't fit the story. I want Sesshomaru to come clean about his relationship with Kouga for the right reasons, not because he's pregnant and now he has no choice BUT to come clean. I want it to be his decision, solely because he loves Kouga and can't imagine marrying someone else, instead of being forced into an union with Kouga because is the right thing to do. That's just my opinion, but I'll probably be ok with which ever direction you decide to take, as long as you continue writing amazing stuff. Please update soon! Your story is one of the main reasons why I check this site periodically! Please, please, please update soon!! This is some awesome writing and I can't get enough!

Dun, dun, dun! And now, the plot thickens! I had a feeling Touga would make his move eventually. I feel bad for Sesshoumaru. He gets the iron fist, probably all of his life, and InuYasha gets to mess around and act like a moron pretty much his entire life. It isn't rare for the heir (oldest son) to get this sort of treatment while the younger is pretty much…ignored, for the most part. Touga wasn't really that wise to spoil and allow InuYasha to have free reign. He may think he can control InuYasha later, but what I see is InuYasha is gonna rebel and run off. But that's not the point of this story right now.

Hm…I don't know, but I feel like Sesshoumaru may snap sometime soon. He reminds me of a strong, yet lithe rope being pulled from each end slowly, yet continuously until at some point, the intense, stressful pressure makes the rope give and it snaps. In other words, he's like an abused dog that gets beat and kicked around until one day that dog has had it with its master and it attacks said master. When it comes to something Sesshoumaru really wants, I see him fighting for it.

If you are not sure where to go from here, you can always message me and I can help. Sometimes it helps to brainstorm with others, especially if they're good at coming up with ideas. Which, I am, by the way. So, if you really need some ideas, feel free to e-mail me. If not, then I can't wait until your next chapter. You're doing a fan-freaking-tastic job, by the way.

The thing that I love about Sesshomaru is that he has a backbone and when he doesn't agree with what you have to say he says so but when it comes to his father he needs to grow a pare before he losses what is most important to him. Kouga is the best thing to happen to him and he's going to give it up because his father says so well FUCK HIM! And when is Sesshomaru getting knocked up cause that is when the fun really begins. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE STOP LETTING SESSY BEING A DUMBASS BY BEING ASHAMED OF WHO HE REALLY IS!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UP-DATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!

Oh i hope it dose not end more please

I have to say I'm sorry I missed this story for so long as it is spectacular. I love how well you've written Kouga topping Sesshomaru, the characterization is perfect and the action so very hot. It is so believable as well, Sesshomaru is perfectly in character, he is in control of his emotions and strong and alpha...and in the bedroom he likes to be dominated by a certain ookami. All in all a phenomenally well written yaoi!

If there is any critique I could give, it has to rest in the last chapter. Inutaisho seems to be the only character in this whose characterization seems off. He's painfully cold in this fic, the last chapter specifically, which just doesn't seem right. He knowingly sacrificed himself to save his human mate and hanyou son, choosing love over power and prestige and dominance. He chose to die for his love to live, gave his life for a son most others saw as a disgrace. Him trying to force Sesshomaru to abandon his own love for an arranged marriage just seems wrong to me.

That aside though, I love this fic, and can't wait for the next chapter!

I think this is getting good now. Idk if you finally decided on Mprg or not, but if Sesshy got preg. or if he for some reason decided to switch the tables on Kouga and he got pregnant. Then Inu-papa would have to accept it XD" From the sound of it Inupapa might be one of those 'i just want grandkids' types.. XD""... Either that or he don't like his oldest son being the one on bottom, which I do agree with. XD"

This chapter was worth the wait. I think you did a good job getting back into the swing of the story.
Thank you for the upload.

Oh my god. You don't know how happy I was, when I saw the update ;u;
Personally, I'm really curious now, if daddy will ever find out about them both. And if yes, I'm just even more curious about his reaction.
(sorry, for my lousy english)

Okay, I've seen a little discussion in the comments, concerning mpreg:
Well, I for myself would love to see the drama and angst caused by this. It would energise the whole story and I think it would become even more interesting.

No male preg please. Althrough i like a good male preg situation every once and awile it wouldnt fit this story
Thanks for the update