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for My Rival's Brother

by Neptunesdemon

person Vyper
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot! I loved it. Please more!
person Vyper
schedule September 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Kouga has to marry Sesshoumaru. Kagura can't have him! It isn't right! Make Sesshoumaru fight for what is right and marry Kouga!
person Mimi
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely outstanding. The sex in this story is so attractively written. And I have to agree that sesshomaru as a whining begging whore is a very nice thing. Please continue, I can't wait to find out how it ends.
person Inuhime
schedule August 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy...... Inupapa is surely going to notice that for sure. But hell I know you're playing him all obedient, and I agree he would be but just to a certain level. I don't think Inupapa would ever be able to control Sesshoumaru to the extent of ordering him who to mate. He loves his father, but Inupapa will have to learn sooner or later, or loose his son one of the two. XD"
person SesshoPuppy
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It says complete is chapter 7 the last one, please say it isn't no offense but that a crappy way to leave off sesshomaru's not going to stand up to his fdahterand tell him he wants to be with kouga there has to be a chapter like that coming.

UPDATE SOON ;)
person VampireDoll666
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Take that bitch Sesshy is taken by Kouga and no one else....you hear that daddy!
person Tee
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LET SESSHOMARU BITCH OUT AND CHANGE HIS MIND. HE HAS FINALLY GROWN A PAIR DON'T LET HIM LOSE THEM. HE HAS TO UNDERSTAND THAT HE WILL NEVER TRULY BE A MAN UNTIL ME MAKES HIS OWN DECISIONS AND IF HIS FATHER TELLS HIM THAT IF HE DOESN'T STOP SEEING KOUGA HE WILL TAKE EVERYTHING FROM HIM LET HIM BECAUSE SESSHOMARU IS SMART ENOUGH TO MAKE ALL ON HIS OWN FROM SCRATCH.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER LONG AND UP-DATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!
person yuki
schedule August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!! What a great Story! Love any second reading it!! :)

person Seira
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no........ Please tell me that last chapter was a plot twist and Sess will turn around and pull the only time he will ever fight his father on a a ruling he has made. It can not end this way! *starts to cry*
schedule July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind having a plot instead of mindlessly, intense ..... (cough, cough)okay maybe I like the steamy scenes.
I think you are doing a fantastic job with this story. Please keep it up. :)
I know in your story Sesshomaru is a submissive in his sexual relationships, but in all other things he is 100% alpha. He always wanted to fight his father because his father was powerful, and I hope he dips into that bank of demon testosterone to tell his father he will damn well decide his own future. I know there has to be rocky roads along the way, but Please Please don't destroy their relationship. Then after Sesshomaru has stood up to his father (possibly being disowned in the process), maybe, just maybe there can be an adorable, little bundle of joy brought into the world. ;) I vote for a dark hair, amber eyed little girl. Than his father, feeling a sense of loss for his son, will gladly accept him back where Sesshomaru can run the family and business like he was meant too. Happy Happy!!
But it's your choice all the way. (Please don't make me cry too much. O.O )