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for My Rival's Brother

by Neptunesdemon

schedule April 13, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Great ending--If you can forgive you are better off.  Good advice.  I'm curious what part you enjoyed the most of your own story c9nightingale at gmail dot com.  Did you use an outline or discovery style writing? 

schedule May 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Definitely worth the wait!   Congratulations on a wonderful wedding scene.   Your choice of words, setting the scene, character responses—Bravo!!!    I liked the way you pulled the Inus together with Inuyasha sitting in his father’s place.    (I like sake.  Can’t believe Sesshomaru doesn’t.)

schedule May 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awesome update! I like that Sessh and Inu are finally finding their way as brothers. 

schedule May 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awesome update! I like that Sessh and Inu are finally finding their way as brothers. 

schedule May 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This story is one that I enjoy reading. When you write I feel like I am in there seeing what you are seeing. I too have dealt with depression and I hope you beat it into the ground. Please don’t stop writing, but also take care of yourself. We are with you as much as you are with us. :)

person asa488
schedule January 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I loved Unexpected Circumstances on ff.net, so I was super happy to see this gem on aff.net was written by you! It's so well-written, and I so love that you went with such a rare pairing. Everyone's so in-character, and all the different lemon scenes were so hot and fun to read, like how many ways can Sesshomaru be submissive to Koga :P The last two chapters are heartbreaking and I was hooked til the very end. I'm really anxious to see everything resolved. I'm sorry you're going through depression...I definitely hope things work out for you. Take your time to conclude the fic, as it should be fun, not a chore. I will be patient too for the next chapter :) Hang in there!

schedule August 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So sorry you've been suffering through depression! I hope you can work your way through it. It took me a long time to work through mine and my anxiety, but there is hope. I promise! 

person Ashatan
schedule June 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Glad to see that you're back! This is one of my absolute favorites to read!

Sorry to hear about your struggle with depression. I do hope things get better for you. I hope that you are able to continue with Sesshomaru and Kouga's story. I would really love to see how things unfolded for them, and Inuyasha as well now that he is aware of their mating! As well as what Touga does from here. 

person Western lady
schedule November 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The last chapter made me cry. It would seem Touga is spelling out more trouble for himself because now he will have to train inuyasha alone and take back being CEO. But isn't inuyasha the owner now? So he could hire sesshomaru back without his fathers say so. Or will sesshomaru take whatever money he's earned and start his own business? What will the wedding be like? What will inuyasha have to say about all of this? Will anyone be able to change Touga's mind?

Hope your feeling better. 

Update soon onegai

Ja ne

 

schedule November 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is glorious...beautiful . ..oh my...I think I am crying.