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by sherlock

person Nose
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!

What can I say but "In your face Sesshomaru"
Absolutely love the repartee between the both of them!!

Can't wait for the new chapter! Will be rereading this again and again till the new one comes out.

On a side note, you might want to adjust the part wherein Inuyasha is thinking back on the conversation/scene with Kagome. It's a little confusing since the initial scene was about the two of them together, Kagome showing Inuyasha the message of BBB then it suddenly changes to the hotel scene. Aside from that it's good!
person Chrys
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the newest chapter.. love this story.. By the end I was like " GO INU!! YOU TELL THAT ASS THE WHAT FORE!?!"

Yeahhh... Thank you and I look forward to the next fun filled chappy.

Ja ne
person Lonewolfstar
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it (Jumping up and down)! Plz update soon.
person Lola
schedule August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG yes, InuYasha did that. I would have put him in his place too. Please don't leave me hanging and hurry with the next update!!!
person dmvyuki
schedule August 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh ... I'm so excited for this update! I love Inuyasha's attitude in this and I anxiously look forward to more please more...more
person kinkou
schedule August 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Way to go INU!!!! *cheers happily* Thank you for that. I couldn't stop grinning the whole day. ^^ I can't wait for the next chappie.
schedule August 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeeeeees thank you for updating! I love a sassy but competent inuyasha, so this story is perfect! I can't wait for more :)

DC
schedule June 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What in the text?!?!? Don't leave everyone hanging, plz update soon.
Ps. Love this story. ^-^
schedule June 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this book is soo much fun to read! I hope you will add more chapters to it. Can't wait to see what happens!
person Vyper
schedule May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I so love the texts. I can't wait to read more. Please write another chapter soon!