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for Fragments of Time

by Imoshen

person Maryse
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! This story has a very promising premise and I'm quite excited for future chapters! There is however one thing, quite a few words and names are misspelled. Maybe you should get a beta? People might stop reading your story because of it, which would be such a shame!
person Blue Bananas
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lookin' forward to more chapters :)