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for Betrayal, Sacrifice, Love.

by keiinyaoiland

person syndey
schedule April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Come on next chapter pleaz I'm dying
person kelaila
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
por favor siga la historia, esta muy interesante
person natasha
schedule December 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh why oh why did you have to stop when it was just getting good.;{* but come on please please update it soon ok please pretty please with a cherry on top.;}*
person anko
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
This is so well written.
Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh please let there b more!
person Raven
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You and your story are the perfect example of what’s wrong with people in society today. I find it utterly disgusting the way you use rape as a prop for your story, and not treating it as the disgusting thing it should be. Rape is a vile act and should not be used in fan fiction lightly, and it should never be used in such a glorified manner; which you clearly do in this story. I am sick and tired of people like you spewing out filth like this, like it was okay and not taking matters like this more seriously. This story is utter filth and you should be ashamed for having written and posted it; rape isn’t a game and should not be treated as such.
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my who would have thought that I would like a rape fic lol please update soon
person slinky
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok..i said i wasnt going to say anything, but i have to; why the hell would inuyasha allow himself to be raped after seeing the hatred and disgust on kagome's face? why would he continue not fighting naraku when kagome called him weak? this was so unbelievable. i dont think inuyasha would've remained docile after kagome called him weak and especially after it looks as if she's blaming him for being raped....

i'm sorry, but i honestly cannot go on reading. whatever future chapters you write, i will not be a fan of...
person Dinka
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay u updated so fast. :3
Poor inuyasha... He ended up raped!! I personally don't like him but i wouldn't wish him that luck....and just because he wants to protect that stupid miko..what a disgrace he is...he should consider that naraku always cheats anyways..so he may end up killing the miko in the end..lol
Yay sesshy is fighting!! I bet he gonna get pissed when he finds the mutt being used
Can't wait to read more..this story has all my attention :)
person kelaila
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
gran historia, síguela pronto.