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January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was an interesting story to BSD it was abandoned.
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story and I am really enjoying it. There are minor errors here and there and spacing would help the flow of the story, but it still flows fairly well. Other than those little things this is a great read and awesome idea. I have never read anything like it.
I can't wait to hear more about Bankotsu's past (and pretty much everyone else's), if it was her when the brothers smelled cinnamon, all about Kikyou, and Naraku. I hope we see more of the brothers and what relationships they will develop with their new employees. Keep up the great work and please update as soon as you are able to.
I can't wait to hear more about Bankotsu's past (and pretty much everyone else's), if it was her when the brothers smelled cinnamon, all about Kikyou, and Naraku. I hope we see more of the brothers and what relationships they will develop with their new employees. Keep up the great work and please update as soon as you are able to.
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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok. It is driving me crazy that you out sound effects and motions in (....). It creates a break in the flow of your writing and inturrupts the readers concentration. Also, is this a rewrite from something previously posted? Parts of it are really similar to another story i have read.
Good luck writing!
Good luck writing!